Two

TWO there are always two entering as animals from the outer pistons in motion planting fans for one another burnt out brains searching names is it a heart… a holocaust or just a flame? to feel pain for real … just once again I would die for as a final claim © Kim van Breda—27 November 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/5/2015 8:57:00 AM

What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share

David Meade

Date: 11/29/2015 2:57:00 PM

I like the way this poem reads and how you formatted the words and lines. I have read it through many times and so many imagines are running in my brain. I afraid this will be with me for quite a while. 7

Kim Van Breda
Date: 11/29/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks for you encouraging comments on this poem David ~~X~~