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Two-Thirty

I have an appointment To have a tooth yanked. This lists pretty high On the fears I have ranked. So, natch, I am nervous And needed a laugh, Which has been supplied By my better-ish half. He told me – “Relax!” As I work on my rhyme; “You don’t have to leave yet For tooth-hurty’s the time!”

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Date: 10/6/2024 1:15:00 PM
A tooth extraction these days is nothing it was years ago. My dentist, a Romanian lady, is fast and painless. Less so when she administers me the bill! / Maurice
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Date: 10/1/2024 7:51:00 PM
May you be fully recovered. I avoid anything to do with teeth.
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Date: 10/1/2024 12:07:00 PM
lol I bet the get fed up of the old 2.30 joke but it always makes me smile:-) hope the appointment went well, its not a pleasant procedure but its hopefully over pretty quickly. hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2024 10:55:00 AM
I love this Ilene with its clever last line!! I too can't stand the dentist! Hope it went well....Debx
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