Date: 3/28/2024
Contest: Senryu's 3 Rhymed by 3 Unrhymed
Sponsor: Hilo Poet
Two wiener dogs meet Each yap loudly, strangely greet Oddly on the street Hounds bite other's butt Owner blames the other's mutt Not open and shut I note discreetly, "Both were gone quick and neatly, Devoured completely" Another witness Says, "'twas one, not two or none Lucky to remain" Judge asked the witness, "If each pooch ate the other Which was out, which in?" A surprise witness Loudly shouts, "there were two, they Switched identities"
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