Twits Wits and Little Fits

Love bluff 
pink lovely stuff 
never burns 
though it melts 
and when it does flesh like metal smelts 
fools toys little
things of no great value 
sweet to touch and taste so hallow 
no finger tips no love on lips 
when you fly and leave 
I hope you know and believe 
that I too go 
from building like water flow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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artlyy Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 6:32 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 9:01 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Bias. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
A   Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 6:28 PM
BIAS ~ congratulations on your win~ENJOYED YOUR POEM,,have yourself a wonderful Sunday~ ;-) take care,..p.d.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:48 PM
congratulations on your win!!----Lori
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 10:06 PM
ah yes i understand, the flesh is pink, runs rio grande, best emeshed with man, as planned ....
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:24 AM
CAn you give me some context, interesting poem, just don't fully understand it, but would like to. Lee
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 11:02 PM
howcome and to what color? just wonderin'~N
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