Twisting Twirling Tatiana

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Twisting Twirling Tatiana Tatiana tried the taunt trampoline, The Tribune tattler Thadeus touted, triumphed as the town's tip-top teen, takes the title, "Tatiana" they shouted. 2020 January 11

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2020 5:38:00 PM

Great Alliteration poem, William. I am unsure of the contest. Did you want both a mental and physical write. Hugs Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 10/17/2020 7:39:00 PM

Thank you

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/16/2020 5:43:00 PM

'Tis an "or", not an "and"--just one of either, Eve, Aloha! William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/12/2020 6:51:00 AM

I don't think to perform as Tatiana even in my young age. Great Job.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/12/2020 11:18:00 AM

Methinks the same as you, Anisha, thank you, Aloha! William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2020 6:05:00 AM

Scary for me. All I can think is broken bones, broken neck, or worse. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/11/2020 11:29:00 AM

Agree, even if I'd be her age, thank you, Sara, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/5/2020 7:38:00 AM

amazing Tatiana!! I cant do any of that!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/5/2020 8:09:00 AM

Myself included, Krish, Aloha! William