William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Twisting Twirling Tatiana

Twisting Twirling Tatiana

Tatiana tried the taunt trampoline,
The Tribune tattler Thadeus touted,
triumphed as the town's tip-top teen,
takes the title, "Tatiana" they shouted.

2020 January 11

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Eve Roper October 16, 2020 at 5:38 PM Great Alliteration poem, William. I am unsure of the contest. Did you want both a mental and physical write. Hugs Eve Eve Roper October 17, 2020 at 7:39 PM Thank you William Kelii Kekaula October 16, 2020 at 5:43 PM 'Tis an "or", not an "and"--just one of either, Eve, Aloha! William

Anisha Dutta October 12, 2020 at 6:51 AM I don't think to perform as Tatiana even in my young age. Great Job. William Kelii Kekaula October 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM Methinks the same as you, Anisha, thank you, Aloha! William

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2020 at 6:05 AM Scary for me. All I can think is broken bones, broken neck, or worse. Sara William Kelii Kekaula October 11, 2020 at 11:29 AM Agree, even if I'd be her age, thank you, Sara, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna October 5, 2020 at 7:38 AM amazing Tatiana!! I cant do any of that!! William Kelii Kekaula October 5, 2020 at 8:09 AM Myself included, Krish, Aloha! William