Twister

Tumultuous funnel spins, a whirling dervish spitting out destruction.

12/5/15
For Silent One's One-liners II contest

stormweatherverse

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Funom Makama

January 14, 2016 at 11:05 AM

#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Kim Merryman

January 26, 2016 at 12:37 PM

Thank you so much, Funom!

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Kim, I am going in circles looking for something to comment on for you!! Anyway, thanks for seeing my poem today! Hope to see some more new work from you soon.

Kim Merryman

December 15, 2015 at 10:02 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I've been busy crocheting ponchos for my granddaughters for Christmas and trying to keep up with contests. Having trouble coming up with anything for the contests, but I'm trying.

Tammy Reams

December 9, 2015 at 5:44 PM

Congrats on your win Kim!

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:16 PM

Thank you, Tammy!

Paul Callus

December 9, 2015 at 8:56 AM

Reads like a nasty tornado to me...and a deserving winner!! Congratulations, Kim:) ~ All the best // paul

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:15 PM

Thank you so much, Paul!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 7, 2015 at 6:46 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Kim.

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:14 PM

Thank you, Nayda!

Michael Tor

December 7, 2015 at 4:18 AM

Great write power packed and true Kim,

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:14 PM

Thank you, Michael!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 7, 2015 at 12:29 AM

Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write Kim!

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:13 PM

Thank you so much, Upma!

Janice Canerdy

December 6, 2015 at 8:49 PM

Very colorful use of personification! Congrats on your win. Janice

Kim Merryman

December 14, 2015 at 1:13 PM

Thank you, Janice! Appreciate your comment!

Len Gasun

December 6, 2015 at 8:00 PM

Wow! This is so wonderful! Many warm congrats on your win my dear friend, Kim! Hugs and cheers! <3 Leonora

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 8:15 PM

Thank you so much, Leonora!

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2015 at 6:26 PM

awesome, Kim. Congrats on the win

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:55 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

James Inman

December 6, 2015 at 6:13 PM

Wonderful imagery.

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:54 PM

Thank you, James!

Alexis Y.

December 6, 2015 at 3:05 PM

WoW! Kim, you did an amazing wind write. You had good imagery in this one-liner! Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:53 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis!

Sandra Haight

December 6, 2015 at 2:41 PM

Lots of imagery in your one-liner, Kim! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:53 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Lin Lane

December 6, 2015 at 2:27 PM

Very nice, Kim..well done!

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:52 PM

Thank you, Lin!

Skat A

December 6, 2015 at 2:18 PM

Kim, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:51 PM

Thank you, SKAT!

Jan Allison

December 6, 2015 at 2:15 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:51 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 6, 2015 at 2:11 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:50 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Samiha Zubair

December 6, 2015 at 1:06 PM

A beautiful write for the contest

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:48 PM

Thank you, Samiha!

Sara Kendrick

December 5, 2015 at 1:51 PM

Good one..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..I am sure that being in a tornado of any size would be terrifying..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kim Merryman

December 6, 2015 at 7:47 PM

Thank you, Sara! I've never been in a tornado but I live in an area that gets them.