Twisted Poems - Balance

(From now on I will try to write some different sort of poems under the title "TWISTED POEMS" or "STRANGE POEMS". I hope I can manage to do that. On the other hand, I would like to read your views about these kinds of poems  as English is not my native language. Thanks for your help, I really appreciate all of them.)

She kissed me on the cheeks,
which was a nice gesture 
that brought tears to my eyes
I felt so unhappy that I wasn't able 
to make her as happy as she wished to be,
and in return for what she did to me, 
I decided not to kiss her on the cheeks
so that she would feel as unhappy as me,
and also she would learn life is really cruel
while she wants to feel very happy
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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Hello Mesut Goktas, I read this poem. She did a nice gesture towards him. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 5:45 AM
I understand all but the last line. Still I love this!
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