Twisted Fate

Take your knife
Carne con sangre
On sale here
Cut me up
Slice me dice me
Taste my sour blood
Savor the flavor
Revenge is on sale
Bitter and sweet all for you
Bile flows through me
Thinking of your hate
You may have butchered me
Slaughtered to rot at high time noon
I have a revelation for you
I love gardens and flowers
I now am one with them
As I feed them, and bring beauty 
To those who quench the thirst of love
I kiss the sun and laugh at you
hahahahahaha
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Emp Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Because of the bitter things that happen, people sometimes go for revenge. This is so dark and express your feelings so deeply. Hope, better things come.
Montalbo Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Very cool... I sometimes feel that way
Vaso Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:54 PM
As long as you not holding a knife!!!!! LOL cheers!
Khan Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 12:07 AM
HA HA HA :D very well (Y)
Vaso Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:53 PM
Thank you Saba!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Why at high time noon you chose... What symbolism you got there.. :) nice nice one:),olive eloi
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 4:59 PM
You caught me, I have no idea, other than it just sounded poetic and BEAUTIFUL. :)
Shiells Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Hello Arthur, WOW! This was powerful. What expressed imagery. This poem had my attention from start to finish. Thank you very much for sharing this with us here. Peace, Deborah
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words!!
Dunn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 12:39 PM
This reminds me of a poem written by one who was a sacrifice for some ritual maybe because of the type of poetry i've been working on lately but if someone from the past could express himself or herself in words this would fit perfectly great job. cheri thank you for your comment also.
Vaso Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 5:01 PM
And thank you too!!!! Much appreciated!!
Thajudeen Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:22 PM
A good fate.
Vaso Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:36 PM
Thank you Muhamma
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