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Twisted


oh, let me tell you a twisted tale . . . 

of robin hood and a merry band of followers
but my story does not take place in folklore but in reality
todays story is of an archer, a person skilled with swords and words
skilled in disguise, taking many false faces
and like robin hood of ancient tales, draped in green but this green is jealousy
like the saying goes, birds of a feather flock together
blanketed in secrecy, having no moral compass to guide the evil
oh the hate is a cancer on my poems and beautiful words
my poetry a garden ravaged by this outlaw with a sharp arrow
devious, crafty, sly, calculating, deceitful, fake, scheming, shifty
we know each false disguise you hide behind
every fraudulent name and game
oh, back to the story . . 
lets raise the curtain to this ancient tale
this robin hood and a merry band of followers
pretend to be good and kind but shoot arrows
trying to murder my words 
from dark hidden places, mingling joyfully
shifty and crooked, shady but quite artful in ways of destruction
a shining star shaped shield of silliness
the way is dangerous in this spider web of lies
bloods seeps from my broken heart like red tears
leaf-strewn gales utter low wails like violins on my murdered poems
robin hood and the merry band of followers
spit them out like stones
and when I read their words, the words squirm like snakes
robin hood of ancient lore stole from the rich to give to the poor
this robin hood steals our poetic muse 
not quite the hero of old
but be assured your swords and sharp arrows are nothing to me
because my poems will sail like swans on quiet waters long after you 
are burning down below for your deceitful ways

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January 21, 2016


Poetry/Free Verse/twisted
Copyright Protected, ID 16-747-746-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Twisted Robin Hood
Sponsor, C.T.

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 2:31 AM
Hi Broken, thank you for the lovely reply. LINDA
La France Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Linda, thanks you so much for always supporting my poetry, you have no idea how much that means to me... love Constance
A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:11 PM
So so amazingly beautiful broken.. great pen n congrats on big win!
La France Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Upma, thanks for the amazing and for the "beautiful", I love that word and the congrats !
Davey Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:50 PM
You made Robin Hood touch part of the reality within us all. Congrats
La France Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Brian, thanks for the congrats and the support, so appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:58 PM
I'm so glad I fave'd this Broken Wings - loved it on the first reading and even more now:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Jan, thanks for that beautiful comment, hugs back at you xx
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:52 PM
I love what Linda said we all might have a little bit of Robin Hood.... I love your creativity on your poem! Congratulations on your win!!!!!!
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Amazing poem Broken.... I like some of the truth you speak. Perhaps we all have a little bit of Robin on the inside. You are good when writing in this style. a perfect 7. Love LINDA
La France Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the amazing and the nice comment, and the 7, and the love, too ~
T  Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 11:42 AM
This is exactly what I was looking for, Robinhood a queen or king of thieves. Some rob not giving the proper placement to those who deserve it, others rob the community, with fake faces boosting their ego. LOL. I heard it all Broken Wings. So much deceit on poetry soup. If we have no rumors, then we have no poetry. Congratulations. CT
La France Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Chase, you always give us the best themes to work with, always inspiring and I just went with how I was feeling that day, yes poetry soup has its share of fake faces, but in reality there are many more wonderful, beautiful poets, thank you for the contest and for my amazing placement, I am honored ~
Cheema Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:38 AM
Hi! Just before posting my poem I thought of reading yours, Constance. It has unnerved me and sucked me dry. Jsut let your divine words glide with the clouds. Love...
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Balveen, yes my poem is raw and should come with a warning, my poems will glide like swans no matter how many arrows or daggers are thrown, thanks for visiting ~
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January 28, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Your justice is sweet on the sharp tips of your hand carved arrows Wings of Fire...J.A.B.
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Justin, thank you for the great comment, yes, my arrows are words of fire, I like that !!
Allison Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:34 AM
WOW!!!!! Chase wanted a twist to the classic tale you sure shot an arrow from the heart with this one Broken Wings! good luck in the contest I love it ... into faves:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Jan, thanks for the wow, I really pulled our the swords, I mean words for this twisted tale, and thank you for the love it and the fav!
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January 22, 2016 at 12:55 AM
hey, I see someone down here used my pen name word warrior. Well, you were a word warrior all right with THIS gem. You had some great imagery in this poem, Constance. I was riveted!
La France Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting and for the great comment especially the word warrior and the rivited !
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 11:25 PM
i guess Robin's gone bad this time around...excellent use of the portrait BW
La France Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Sage , thanks for visiting my poem, and this Robin hood and merry band are no hero's quite the opposite!
White Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:48 PM
I love this. Word Warrior at its best I salute you BW. Kelli
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Kellie, thank you so much, I like that word warrior reference, oh yes I put my skills to work in this one, I can feel the arrow whizzing past me ~
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