Twisted

Two time tongue twister twisted two turns
Two turns twisted tightly torchered tongues touch
Two turns of tongue, twice, thrice
Thick tongue throbs in twisted torment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Glad it was my mind and not tongue doing this one. The t's took top place in this Phyl.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Hey,I Missed your tongue twister. Gosh, yours was truly one of the more difficult ones. Yours didn't get a place either? I'll have to check that winner list and see if you got on.
Wilson Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Yikes! I didn't do well at all!Best of luck Phyllis...love,Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 4:56 PM
well Phyl I don't think I got past the first line before messing it up ...haha.. great entry for the contest..good luck my friend.. a real tongue twister for sure..luv..
Merryman Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Terribly tricky! Good one, Phyllis. Kim
Babcock Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 2:13 PM
thanks Kim
A   Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 11:26 AM
hehheheh I needed this twister... now say it backwards twice,, my tongue sounds so weird... Thank you for sharing your wonderful tongue twisting poem,, Take care,..P.D.
Babcock Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 2:13 PM
thanks
Lane Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Terrific!
Babcock Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 2:13 PM
thanks
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