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Twisted

Two time tongue twister twisted two turns Two turns twisted tightly torchered tongues touch Two turns of tongue, twice, thrice Thick tongue throbs in twisted torment.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 12:15:00 PM

Glad it was my mind and not tongue doing this one. The t's took top place in this Phyl.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2011 8:51:00 PM

Hey,I Missed your tongue twister. Gosh, yours was truly one of the more difficult ones. Yours didn't get a place either? I'll have to check that winner list and see if you got on.

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/25/2011 6:47:00 PM

Yikes! I didn't do well at all!Best of luck Phyllis...love,Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2011 4:56:00 PM

well Phyl I don't think I got past the first line before messing it up ...haha.. great entry for the contest..good luck my friend.. a real tongue twister for sure..luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/25/2011 12:16:00 PM

Terribly tricky! Good one, Phyllis. Kim

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/25/2011 2:13:00 PM

thanks Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2011 11:26:00 AM

hehheheh I needed this twister... now say it backwards twice,, my tongue sounds so weird... Thank you for sharing your wonderful tongue twisting poem,, Take care,..P.D.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/25/2011 2:13:00 PM

thanks

Tony Lane

Date: 10/25/2011 10:56:00 AM

Terrific!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/25/2011 2:13:00 PM

thanks