Twisted

My mind is a twisted place,
a carnival of sin
and should you ever see its face
beware when you step in.

I can unleash a primal need,
a venture at its best
as I submit to you on my knees
and offer you no rest.

Step into my world of play,
fear, not its erotic whim
dive with both feet completely in
for its sin, in which you swim.

As pleasure boast upon your lips,
it's hard to get your fill
shall I be your daring ink
and you, my lustful quill?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/10/2022 7:07:00 PM
Another good one, I also have one called Twisted Love :)
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 3/14/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. I will have to stop in and check out your work soon. :) Jess
Date: 3/8/2022 1:04:00 PM
Jessica, wow. I appreciate your poetry! "Twisted" blew my mind. Even though I feel it was misspelled, I nearly "burst" my self. You should win the Naughty Contest. Kev
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 3/9/2022 3:18:00 PM
Hello Kevin, Thank you for dropping in and enjoying this poem. I did check to see if I had any misspelled things, and it said I did not. It is always good to re-check things though. Thanks again and have a great day! Jess
Date: 11/2/2018 4:11:00 PM
- A poetically great writing, Jessica :) - Nice to see you ... happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 11/3/2018 11:52:00 AM
Aww thank you so much as always Anne-Lise. You are always so sweet to me, and I hope today find you well. Great hearing from you again. Hugs, Jess
Date: 11/2/2018 3:56:00 PM
Fine piece Jessica, so well penned with great wording. Keep spilling the ink!, Gordon
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Date: 11/3/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon, appreciate the kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Have a great one! Jess
Date: 11/1/2018 2:49:00 PM
Nicely done. I enjoyed this and especially the ink and quill connection at the end.
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 11/1/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris, your comment was greatly appreciated :)
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