Twisted

My mind is a twisted place,
a carnival of sin
and should you ever see its face
beware when you step in.

I can unleash a primal need,
a venture at its best
as I submit to you on my knees
and offer you no rest.

Step into my world of play,
fear, not its erotic whim
dive with both feet completely in
for its sin, in which you swim.

As pleasure boast upon your lips,
it's hard to get your fill
shall I be your daring ink
and you, my lustful quill?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duncan Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Another good one, I also have one called Twisted Love :)
Thompson Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. I will have to stop in and check out your work soon. :) Jess
Lawrence Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Jessica, wow. I appreciate your poetry! "Twisted" blew my mind. Even though I feel it was misspelled, I nearly "burst" my self. You should win the Naughty Contest. Kev
Thompson Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Hello Kevin, Thank you for dropping in and enjoying this poem. I did check to see if I had any misspelled things, and it said I did not. It is always good to re-check things though. Thanks again and have a great day! Jess
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 4:11 PM
- A poetically great writing, Jessica :) - Nice to see you ... happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thompson Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Aww thank you so much as always Anne-Lise. You are always so sweet to me, and I hope today find you well. Great hearing from you again. Hugs, Jess
Mcconnell Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Fine piece Jessica, so well penned with great wording. Keep spilling the ink!, Gordon
Thompson Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thank you so much Gordon, appreciate the kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Have a great one! Jess
Green Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Nicely done. I enjoyed this and especially the ink and quill connection at the end.
Thompson Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much Chris, your comment was greatly appreciated :)
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