Twist of Fate

I don't see how people can go through it.
I mean it makes me want to vomit.
The person has to have another choice.
The only thing she hears is her own voice.

She doesn't know if she can give it up.
Its something that matters like a little pup.
If I go through with it, I don't know what I'm going to do.
Now its a part of me, this decision won't even affect you.

She has gotten use to it, she doesn't want to give it away.
Do you know how I feel, do you even realize the price I have to pay?
My emotions are everywhere, being pregnant is playing with my hormones.
I'm sorry for yelling and screaming, talking to you in those awful tones.

But we better go to the clinic and get this over with and done.
Giving this up is going to be so hard, were almost one.
Hold on honey, there has to be something, a different we can try.
I think I have an idea, and with this we won't even have to say goodbye.

I mean why go to the clinic and pay $500 dollars, that's dumb.
Lets just go downtown and give $20 to some random bum.
I'll have him punch you in the baby maker.
Don't worry sweetheart, we'll find a taker.  

Finally we found a solution to our problem honey.
Now we don't have to go spend all that money.

***For Natalie Fikkema's contest, “Burlesque Twist”****
Not a 100% sure this is the “twist” you were looking for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/25/2011 4:45:00 PM
Chris-Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-you surprised me :)
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Chris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:14:00 AM
winning piece for me, chris.. congrats and thanks for appreciating my piece for your contest... counseling has its rewards. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:19:00 PM
OMG well, what can one say? sigh...[ I know line 6 & 8 / it is [it's] line 14 we are [we're] line 18 let us [let's]....light & love
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:27:00 AM
A glorious write,,,,and win! Best to u, Matt. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/18/2011 8:54:00 PM
Well done and congrats. Tony
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Date: 8/18/2011 2:52:00 AM
hey Chris. congrats on your first place win David
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:39:00 AM
Oooh, a very dangerous twist, Chris. Compelling poem that gripped my attention throughout. I don't have time to congratulate all the winners now, but I had to visit you and Joyce, two of my faves, sharing the top spot again! Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations Chris. Happy to be sharing no. 1 with you. Joyce
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:38:00 PM
Super congrats Chris on your first place win .. terrific piece luv..
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:24:00 PM
oh, man... this is POWERFUL! tighten up the presentation, k?
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:03:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Chris. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:36:00 PM
Very appealing and engrossing tale you have worded so well, Chris
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