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Twist My Tongue For Poetry Contest

Sister Susie swigged seven Sangria's,
Seven Sangria's sister Susie swigged.
Swigging seven Sangria's was so stupid -
Susie’s severely sozzled her twin sister twigged!

1/17/20

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2020 8:04:00 PM Back for congrats, Jan! Love that word sozzled! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/24/2020 3:50:00 AM thanks Kim its something you will never see me do as I rarely drink but have been drunk twice before in my youth ans its not something I ever want to do again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/23/2020 7:30:00 PM Awesomely done and won, Jan. Congratulations Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/24/2020 3:49:00 AM thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/23/2020 3:30:00 PM Good one, Jan. CONGRATS. Janice Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 6:42:00 PM thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith Date: 1/23/2020 2:40:00 PM Great fun this Jan, congrats. :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 6:42:00 PM thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 1/22/2020 6:40:00 PM you're pretty awesome :) this is fantastic , congratulations on your win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:07:00 PM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour Date: 1/22/2020 12:25:00 AM Great fun Jan, many congrats on your win! I did try with this one but found it so difficult, .so very well done dear Jan. Hope all is well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:07:00 PM thanks so much Ann:-) thinking of you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/21/2020 8:15:00 PM Your sozzle sure sizzled in your wonderful win, Jan! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:06:00 PM thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 1/21/2020 7:31:00 PM Back with congrats on your win, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:04:00 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Nick Bagnall Date: 1/21/2020 5:39:00 PM Yuk, in this case that is a positive comment, well done Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:04:00 PM lol thanks Nick:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings Date: 1/21/2020 4:37:00 PM Back with Congrats on your win, Jan. // Barry. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:03:00 PM thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/21/2020 4:27:00 PM Way to go, congrats! Hugs Rick Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:03:00 PM Thanks so much Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta Date: 1/21/2020 11:39:00 AM VERY GOOD. CONGRATS to win. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:00:00 PM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams Date: 1/19/2020 11:38:00 AM good tongue twister Jan...hopefully sister Susie learned a lesson or two...lol... best wishes in the contest :) hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 12:18:00 PM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 1/19/2020 11:38:00 AM You nailed this one, Jan! I had a hard job doing mine. I hope our sponsor will twig on to what I had in mind:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 12:18:00 PM I found it quite a challenge Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings Date: 1/19/2020 7:31:00 AM Brilliant, Jan. Easily one of your best. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 9:18:00 AM aww thanks Barry it was quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/18/2020 8:11:00 PM Gosh, you're increasing my vocabulary exponentially here: Tonight it's 'sozzled.' I think folks on this side of the pond say 'sauced. Thanks! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 6:47:00 AM Happy to help GW lol:-) Makes me so glad I rarely drink alcohol - we have been on 'all inclusive' holidays and most of the time I was drinking water but I did have 2 cocktails at our last hotel lol - I am cheap to run:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/18/2020 12:18:00 PM I couldn't get thru it without goofing up Jan. This is a good one for the contest. xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 6:45:00 AM Thanks Connie, I think I have read the one I predict to be top placed poem today:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2020 11:49:00 AM Seriously! LOL Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2020 6:45:00 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/18/2020 9:05:00 AM Well done. I was able to say it twice but then the wheels came off. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/18/2020 10:41:00 AM Thanks for dropping by Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 3:43:00 AM Haha, Sister Suzie is no doubt regretting it, too. Lots of fun there. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/18/2020 3:46:00 AM lol yeah I bet she felt bad the next day but its all self inflicted lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 1/17/2020 7:23:00 PM A fun tongue twister, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/18/2020 3:25:00 AM Thanks Line, it was a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/17/2020 4:30:00 PM Clever girl! You should work for an ad agent with your talent in finding illustrations! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM Thanks Rico, I wish I was a girl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 1/17/2020 4:18:00 PM Here is the winner right here. Now where is that crown? This was really good Jan. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/17/2020 4:15:00 PM Brilliant Jan, managed the first line,. Now off to a and e to have my tongue untied lol Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM lol Tom. I had to change my original idea as I couldn't get it to rhyme, had fun with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx