Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Twist My Tongue For Poetry Contest

Sister Susie swigged seven Sangria's,
Seven Sangria's sister Susie swigged.
Swigging seven Sangria's was so stupid -
Susie’s severely sozzled her twin sister twigged!

1/17/20

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Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:04 PM Back for congrats, Jan! Love that word sozzled! Jan Allison January 24, 2020 at 3:50 AM thanks Kim its something you will never see me do as I rarely drink but have been drunk twice before in my youth ans its not something I ever want to do again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:30 PM Awesomely done and won, Jan. Congratulations Jan Allison January 24, 2020 at 3:49 AM thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy January 23, 2020 at 3:30 PM Good one, Jan. CONGRATS. Janice Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 6:42 PM thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith January 23, 2020 at 2:40 PM Great fun this Jan, congrats. :) Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 6:42 PM thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper January 22, 2020 at 6:40 PM you're pretty awesome :) this is fantastic , congratulations on your win Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour January 22, 2020 at 12:25 AM Great fun Jan, many congrats on your win! I did try with this one but found it so difficult, .so very well done dear Jan. Hope all is well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:07 PM thanks so much Ann:-) thinking of you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 8:15 PM Your sozzle sure sizzled in your wonderful win, Jan! Cheers, Gershon Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:06 PM thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier January 21, 2020 at 7:31 PM Back with congrats on your win, Jan. Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:04 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Nick Bagnall January 21, 2020 at 5:39 PM Yuk, in this case that is a positive comment, well done Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:04 PM lol thanks Nick:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings January 21, 2020 at 4:37 PM Back with Congrats on your win, Jan. // Barry. Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:03 PM thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2020 at 4:27 PM Way to go, congrats! Hugs Rick Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:03 PM Thanks so much Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta January 21, 2020 at 11:39 AM VERY GOOD. CONGRATS to win. Hugs. Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:00 PM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 19, 2020 at 11:38 AM You nailed this one, Jan! I had a hard job doing mine. I hope our sponsor will twig on to what I had in mind:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 12:18 PM I found it quite a challenge Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams January 19, 2020 at 11:38 AM good tongue twister Jan...hopefully sister Susie learned a lesson or two...lol... best wishes in the contest :) hugs Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 12:18 PM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings January 19, 2020 at 7:31 AM Brilliant, Jan. Easily one of your best. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 9:18 AM aww thanks Barry it was quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf January 18, 2020 at 8:11 PM Gosh, you're increasing my vocabulary exponentially here: Tonight it's 'sozzled.' I think folks on this side of the pond say 'sauced. Thanks! ~ Gershon Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 6:47 AM Happy to help GW lol:-) Makes me so glad I rarely drink alcohol - we have been on 'all inclusive' holidays and most of the time I was drinking water but I did have 2 cocktails at our last hotel lol - I am cheap to run:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong January 18, 2020 at 12:18 PM I couldn't get thru it without goofing up Jan. This is a good one for the contest. xxoo Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 6:45 AM Thanks Connie, I think I have read the one I predict to be top placed poem today:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2020 at 11:49 AM Seriously! LOL Jan Allison January 19, 2020 at 6:45 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 18, 2020 at 9:05 AM Well done. I was able to say it twice but then the wheels came off. Hugs Rick. Jan Allison January 18, 2020 at 10:41 AM Thanks for dropping by Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser January 18, 2020 at 3:43 AM Haha, Sister Suzie is no doubt regretting it, too. Lots of fun there. Jan Allison January 18, 2020 at 3:46 AM lol yeah I bet she felt bad the next day but its all self inflicted lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier January 17, 2020 at 7:23 PM A fun tongue twister, Jan. Jan Allison January 18, 2020 at 3:25 AM Thanks Line, it was a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta January 17, 2020 at 4:30 PM Clever girl! You should work for an ad agent with your talent in finding illustrations! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison January 17, 2020 at 5:39 PM Thanks Rico, I wish I was a girl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green January 17, 2020 at 4:18 PM Here is the winner right here. Now where is that crown? This was really good Jan. Best wishes in the contest Jan Allison January 17, 2020 at 5:39 PM Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham January 17, 2020 at 4:15 PM Brilliant Jan, managed the first line,. Now off to a and e to have my tongue untied lol Good luck. Tom Jan Allison January 17, 2020 at 5:39 PM lol Tom. I had to change my original idea as I couldn't get it to rhyme, had fun with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx