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Sister Susie swigged seven Sangria's, Seven Sangria's sister Susie swigged. Swigging seven Sangria's was so stupid - Susie’s severely sozzled her twin sister twigged! 1/17/20

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/23/2020 8:04:00 PM

Back for congrats, Jan! Love that word sozzled!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2020 3:50:00 AM

thanks Kim its something you will never see me do as I rarely drink but have been drunk twice before in my youth ans its not something I ever want to do again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2020 7:30:00 PM

Awesomely done and won, Jan. Congratulations

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2020 3:49:00 AM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/23/2020 3:30:00 PM

Good one, Jan. CONGRATS. Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 6:42:00 PM

thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith

Date: 1/23/2020 2:40:00 PM

Great fun this Jan, congrats. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 6:42:00 PM

thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2020 6:40:00 PM

you're pretty awesome :) this is fantastic , congratulations on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/22/2020 12:25:00 AM

Great fun Jan, many congrats on your win! I did try with this one but found it so difficult, .so very well done dear Jan. Hope all is well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:07:00 PM

thanks so much Ann:-) thinking of you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2020 8:15:00 PM

Your sozzle sure sizzled in your wonderful win, Jan! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:06:00 PM

thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/21/2020 7:31:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:04:00 PM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/21/2020 5:39:00 PM

Yuk, in this case that is a positive comment, well done

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:04:00 PM

lol thanks Nick:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/21/2020 4:37:00 PM

Back with Congrats on your win, Jan. // Barry.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:03:00 PM

thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2020 4:27:00 PM

Way to go, congrats! Hugs Rick

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:03:00 PM

Thanks so much Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/21/2020 11:39:00 AM

VERY GOOD. CONGRATS to win. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2020 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/19/2020 11:38:00 AM

good tongue twister Jan...hopefully sister Susie learned a lesson or two...lol... best wishes in the contest :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2020 11:38:00 AM

You nailed this one, Jan! I had a hard job doing mine. I hope our sponsor will twig on to what I had in mind:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 12:18:00 PM

I found it quite a challenge Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/19/2020 7:31:00 AM

Brilliant, Jan. Easily one of your best. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 9:18:00 AM

aww thanks Barry it was quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2020 8:11:00 PM

Gosh, you're increasing my vocabulary exponentially here: Tonight it's 'sozzled.' I think folks on this side of the pond say 'sauced. Thanks! ~ Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 6:47:00 AM

Happy to help GW lol:-) Makes me so glad I rarely drink alcohol - we have been on 'all inclusive' holidays and most of the time I was drinking water but I did have 2 cocktails at our last hotel lol - I am cheap to run:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2020 12:18:00 PM

I couldn't get thru it without goofing up Jan. This is a good one for the contest. xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I think I have read the one I predict to be top placed poem today:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2020 11:49:00 AM

Seriously! LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2020 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2020 9:05:00 AM

Well done. I was able to say it twice but then the wheels came off. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2020 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/18/2020 3:43:00 AM

Haha, Sister Suzie is no doubt regretting it, too. Lots of fun there.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2020 3:46:00 AM

lol yeah I bet she felt bad the next day but its all self inflicted lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2020 7:23:00 PM

A fun tongue twister, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2020 3:25:00 AM

Thanks Line, it was a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/17/2020 4:30:00 PM

Clever girl! You should work for an ad agent with your talent in finding illustrations! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Rico, I wish I was a girl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 1/17/2020 4:18:00 PM

Here is the winner right here. Now where is that crown? This was really good Jan. Best wishes in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2020 4:15:00 PM

Brilliant Jan, managed the first line,. Now off to a and e to have my tongue untied lol Good luck. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM

lol Tom. I had to change my original idea as I couldn't get it to rhyme, had fun with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx