Twist In Time

As I stand here in front of my closet , starring in to the space...
I wonder which black dress to choose, and how I am going to face..
All the guests that will be there, at your final resting place...
I look in the mirror and what do I see  ?
But cuts and scratches all over me...
Although I don’t feel any physical pain...
Oh, what’s that I hear?... could it be rain ?
I miss you already...just what went wrong ?..
We were driving along just listening to our favorite song...
I remember the curve on that old mountain road...
And then heard the train crash... and then explode...
Time to go called out my Mother...
It was a cold November morning, and very heavy rain...
And I swear I heard the whistle of a train...
As I looked around I could see...
So many friends and family...
Standing in the crowd was Aunt Sarah and Uncle Fred...
OMG  ! I thought they were dead...
And there’s dear old Michael...
I had heard he crashed his motorcycle...
All of a sudden I saw YOU stand...
With a bright red rose, you held in your hand...
What are you doing I wanted to shout...
But then I realized what you were about...
You dropped the rose upon MY grave...
It was then I realized... You  were the one, that was saved...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/25/2014 8:49:00 AM
Wow!!!! Stunning moment of realization at the end.
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:12:00 AM
Monterey...thank you, glad you enjoyed it...hope you will check out other writes, as I use " twists and turns" in quite a few..just like in real life, we never know to expect !...enjoy the beautiful weather..
Date: 3/22/2014 7:19:00 AM
km - i am overcome with goosebumps. love, Kathy
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Date: 3/22/2014 5:54:00 PM
Kathryn...If you liked this you will love " Gator Bait Series " 1-5...and " Garden Ruse " hope you enjoy them guaranteed " goosebumps "...
Date: 3/20/2014 1:12:00 AM
Good piece. Loved the flow.
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Date: 3/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Jon..very much appreciated...
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