Twirl and Whirl - Nk

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Twirl and Whirl - NK though love may break it won’t die but shine bright as a star in the sky deep in heart forever in the mind’s eye. what’er will be is meant to be love is a merry chance a dream that has come true it’s waltzing in moonlight in flowering romance to music of the night slip on your dancing shoes twirl whirl, free heart and soul and dance. *+* 23rd September 2022 ** Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2022 4:55:00 AM

Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I appreciate your visit to my page a few days ago. Sorry so long in commenting back on one of your poems. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/5/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I’m pleased you enjoyed reading this New-Ku form poem… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/28/2022 8:14:00 AM

Your poetry has its own SIGNATURE STYLE AND I LOVE YOUR SPECIAL WRITES AS I DO THIS ONE. GUESS ONE OF MY MISTAKES IS TO ANSWER IN CAPS. LOVE YOU MY FRIEND. HAVE NOT BEEN WELL - I WAS NEARLY SENT TO HEAVEN IF I WOULD EVER REACH THERE, HUGS BLESSINGS JENNIFER

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/28/2022 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, I’m sorry that you’ve have been so unwell and I wish you a speedy recovery. For sure when the time comes there’ll be a welcome in heaven for you… Belle