Twirl and Whirl - Nk

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Twirl and Whirl - NK
though love may break it won’t die but shine bright as a star in the sky deep in heart forever in the mind’s eye. what’er will be is meant to be love is a merry chance a dream that has come true it’s waltzing in moonlight in flowering romance to music of the night slip on your dancing shoes twirl whirl, free heart and soul and dance.
*+* 23rd September 2022 ** Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 10/5/2022 4:55:00 AM
Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I appreciate your visit to my page a few days ago. Sorry so long in commenting back on one of your poems. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/5/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Sara, I’m pleased you enjoyed reading this New-Ku form poem… Belle
Date: 9/28/2022 8:14:00 AM
Your poetry has its own SIGNATURE STYLE AND I LOVE YOUR SPECIAL WRITES AS I DO THIS ONE. GUESS ONE OF MY MISTAKES IS TO ANSWER IN CAPS. LOVE YOU MY FRIEND. HAVE NOT BEEN WELL - I WAS NEARLY SENT TO HEAVEN IF I WOULD EVER REACH THERE, HUGS BLESSINGS JENNIFER
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/28/2022 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I’m sorry that you’ve have been so unwell and I wish you a speedy recovery. For sure when the time comes there’ll be a welcome in heaven for you… Belle
Date: 9/25/2022 8:13:00 PM
lovely as can be, Belle! What a whirl!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/28/2022 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, very much appreciated… Belle
Date: 9/24/2022 6:29:00 PM
This poetic flower blossoms in the moonlight and the starlight, Belle. Hurrah! Lovely as can be!. :) Gershon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2022 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon, I’m most appreciative of your lovely comment… Belle
Date: 9/24/2022 7:26:00 AM
This form lends itself quite nicely to the poetry you crafted dear, Belle. I enjoyed reading it! Be blessed and enjoy your weekend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2022 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Sotto, it’s good to try new poetry forms, I enjoy the challenge. Blessings, Belle
Date: 9/24/2022 2:21:00 AM
You have to work hard to keep love alive and happy.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2022 7:30:00 PM
You certainly do Victor, it’s worth it though. Thank you… Belle Be
Date: 9/23/2022 8:32:00 PM
This poem works very well with this form. I enjoyed it!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2022 7:27:00 PM
Thank you Jeff, I joyed writing this in Charlie’s New-Ku form… Belle
Date: 9/23/2022 7:35:00 PM
Love this one Belle. I am sure Charlie will enjoy reading...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/23/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thank you Michael, I do hope Charlie likes this poem written in his New-Ku form.. Belle
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