Twinkling Star

Wish away, on my twinkling points of lights.
There is a supergaint star in my sight each
and every night.

I wish upon my star for hopes and dreams 
to come my way.
It shines, not only for me but all who take 
the time, to look up for the light.

I gaze up and know my celestial star is
eternal, for someone eles, down the
road will wish upon it too.


Copyright 2008 
Anne Rutherford
Poems From The Heart 
Series.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Hello Anne, I think that star gets plenty of use. May your hopes and dreams live eternally. Peace. :)
Davis Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:31 AM
This is an endearing and charming write. I can feel the emotion in every line. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Rainbow poem. I appreciate it
Song Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Oh how I have missed you dear Anne. I wonder by chance if we have ever wished upon the same star?...wouldn't that be just awesome...only God could arrange something that amazing...hope u are doing well...Spring always gives my mood a boost! I think I might have just made it through a dismal winter again..let me know how u are..post some new poems, please. LOve, Gwendolen
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April 3, 2012 at 8:21 AM
Dear Anne, I very much enjoy YOUR POETRY I feel YOUR "Pain, LOVE, Sorrow in YOUR Quill I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Seraphin Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 6:37 PM
* "Closing My Eyes Gently to Find * My Very Own Star to Caress This Heart ?
Maverick Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Enjoyed reading this star write Anne, (gave me a lift..
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 3:53 PM
In the night of lifes twilight. We rest our eye's and find our sight. We're bonded to an invisible being. It's wonderous what the soul is seeing. So wish upon that star above. For we all know it's in our heart, and it's called love. Thanks for the heads up on hear vs here.
Foulk Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:58 PM
this was a great piece of work, really enjoyed readingin this one. thank you for commenting on Brave Little Campers.
Palmateer Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Beautiful!!!!! it really touched me!
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April 29, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Another nice write, love the stars as well, enjoyed. Alexa
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April 25, 2011 at 10:30 AM
Hi again,, aren't we all pulled in by the light of winks.... what a delight to read and twinkle the mind again ,,, and in hopes someone sees the same wish i do... enjoyed your poem... take care... p.d.
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April 25, 2011 at 10:27 AM
yes you go to the : member area : the **out box. ** there you can delete the comments you want... out box is all poems going out... thanxs.... always..p.d.
M Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:47 AM
You are so lucky to have a star ! Great poem Anne
Green Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 4:15 PM
wow, great poem...
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 3:40 PM
I like this one too. I wrote Twinkle Twinkle little star but a bit naughty
Squyres Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 9:50 AM
As I read this the song...When we wish upon a star, makes no difference who we are...etc...ran through my mind. Now it will be there all day lol No problem !! Love the poem and the eternal star is always there to wish upon!!!
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April 18, 2011 at 7:42 AM
A lovely inspiring read Anne. So good to find you in this site. Bravo on this excellent write!
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