Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Twinkle, twinkle little star I don’t know what got you where you are. Up above, but I can’t see you Through the snow and clouds there too. Twinkle, twinkle little star How I would like to be where you are. Looking down upon the ground Watching us all race around. Twinkle, twinkle little star Why can’t I be where you are? Then again I would be dead That’s a thing that we all dread. Looking up, we can’t see you I suppose you cannot see me too Twinkle, twinkle little star I think I’ll not go where you are.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/12/2014 5:46:00 PM

No dont there,just write and write and you'll be a star, to shine here on earth

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/13/2014 2:11:00 AM

and beautiful comments too, thank you harry xx

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/8/2012 1:38:00 PM

Dear Mandy, Look out Mother Goose, here comes Mandy Tams Superb adaption of a favorite Nursery rhyme. Good decission not to go where Twinkle is, Who would Inspire me LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/8/2012 1:42:00 PM

bless you Harry xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2011 7:03:00 AM

The new:Twinkle,twinkle little star....and a good one! Bravo! OXOX - Love Anne-Lise and winter Norway.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2011 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise glad you like it. Happiness to you and yours x

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/16/2011 3:39:00 PM

oh what a wonderful way to adapt Twinkle, this is excellent. harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2011 3:35:00 AM

Thanks harry a bit of fun .Happiness to you aal x