Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Twinkle, twinkle little star
I don’t know what got you where you are.
Up above, but I can’t see you
Through the snow and clouds there too.

Twinkle, twinkle little star
How I would like to be where you are.
Looking down upon the ground
Watching us all race around.

Twinkle, twinkle little star
Why can’t I be where you are?
Then again I would be dead
That’s a thing that we all dread.

Looking up, we can’t see you
I suppose you cannot see me too
Twinkle, twinkle little star
I think I’ll not go where you are.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/12/2014 5:46:00 PM
No dont there,just write and write and you'll be a star, to shine here on earth
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/13/2014 2:11:00 AM
and beautiful comments too, thank you harry xx
Date: 12/8/2012 1:38:00 PM
Dear Mandy, Look out Mother Goose, here comes Mandy Tams Superb adaption of a favorite Nursery rhyme. Good decission not to go where Twinkle is, Who would Inspire me LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/8/2012 1:42:00 PM
bless you Harry xx
Date: 12/17/2011 7:03:00 AM
The new:Twinkle,twinkle little star....and a good one! Bravo! OXOX - Love Anne-Lise and winter Norway.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2011 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise glad you like it. Happiness to you and yours x
Date: 12/16/2011 3:39:00 PM
oh what a wonderful way to adapt Twinkle, this is excellent. harry
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2011 3:35:00 AM
Thanks harry a bit of fun .Happiness to you aal x
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