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My bones are tingling with a sort of feeling. Like how the air feels as it sets in altering. A quick season before it started raining. Something that causes you to unwilling. Afferent powers and their link to thinking And here I am, all of a sudden panicking. Similar to the tide being hit by something. By the outset of a minute, I am shrinking.
Written: May 29, 2022

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Date: 5/30/2022 10:27:00 AM
Witty and pretty, my dearest, Lasaad! Blessings!
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Date: 5/29/2022 11:17:00 PM
Smart and clever poetry, I'm, there now, so can relate.
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Date: 5/29/2022 8:44:00 PM
Sounds like the chaos of unknowing, the sensations of changes without explanation, to me. Nice monorhyme, Sotto.
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Date: 5/29/2022 7:54:00 PM
Sure is a lot of tingling and twingling, jingling and jangling going on here, my friend! Hope the bones are recovering now...
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