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Twin Scepters

Nimbus gather above, racing swiftly upon the wind
With face lifted to the darkening tendrils of her skies,
my breath crashes like thunder hammering a loud din
as her twin scepters of lightning flash before my eyes

I behold the majesty of the siren's long pent release
She touches the deepest roots of my stimulated soul
In guttural voice she commands the storm to cease
Captivated, I am enslaved by the tempest in control


July 15th, 2017

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Jan Allison July 15, 2017 at 11:32 AM Powerfully penned Lin and I love the personification (and also the picture)all we can do when a storm is brewing is sit tight and write:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane July 15, 2017 at 5:23 PM This was a storm of passion...the woman being the nimbus and her mate the slave to her passionate storm. Think about her twin scepters. Thanks, chica.

Frank Sheehan July 15, 2017 at 11:18 AM Wonderful poem. Enjoyed it immensely especially the last stanza. It has nice rhythm and flow. Lin Lane July 15, 2017 at 5:21 PM Thank you very much, Frank. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Charlie Smith July 15, 2017 at 9:22 AM Interestingly short piece from you Lin, was it a recent bit of weather inspiring you? Well written. Lin Lane July 15, 2017 at 5:21 PM No, Charlie. It was one of those few lines written in a notebook that never came to fruition. I'm not sure it has now, but there it is. Thanks, my friend.

Heidi Sands July 15, 2017 at 9:04 AM This is an amazing poem Lin. I was really pulled into the write! Well done :) Lin Lane July 15, 2017 at 5:20 PM Gratias, Heidi.