Lin Lane Poet Tanka

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Twin Flames Burned

Long ago they met
a night filled with sweet romance
igniting two flames
life took them separate ways
fire cooled, dwindled to embers

sparks flew once again
when fate threw them together
rekindling the fire
cherished love led to marriage
twin flames burned: deep in each heart


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March 3, 2016
Twin Flames:   Nayda

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Vladislav Raven March 15, 2016 at 8:17 AM Hi Lin, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Such a simply beautiful piece Lin, well crafted. I enjoyed the read. A seven from me Lin....Vlad.

Charlie Smith March 13, 2016 at 2:12 PM Congratulations again Lin, fine work. Lin Lane March 13, 2016 at 6:30 PM Thank you, Charlie.

Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 12:31 PM Lin, many congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo Lin Lane March 13, 2016 at 6:29 PM Thanks a bunch, Laura.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 13, 2016 at 11:33 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin Lin Lane March 13, 2016 at 6:29 PM Thanks, Nayda.

Timothy Hicks March 7, 2016 at 10:15 PM A sweet story about love found, lost, then gained again. Love cooling is better than love being extinguished. The embers analogy is poignant. Lin Lane March 8, 2016 at 2:43 AM If it was love in the first place, there's always an ember. Twas so with me, but better off not having them fanned. Thanks for visiting me.

Susan Palli March 5, 2016 at 7:21 AM So beautiful. I love love stories! Thanks Lin Lane March 8, 2016 at 2:42 AM Thank you very much, Susan.

Eve Roper March 4, 2016 at 8:08 PM Lin, very good romantic verse a 7 ;good luck in the contest. Lin Lane March 5, 2016 at 2:03 AM Thanks, sweet friend.

Daniel Turner March 3, 2016 at 7:21 AM My second chance burned too hot and burned completely up then there was nothing left but one flame. Lovely tankas and am so happy you are happy. Love to you my sweet Georgia Peach:) Lin Lane March 3, 2016 at 7:47 AM Thanks, Danny. One flame in my own heart is enough for me.

Gabriel Sundman March 3, 2016 at 6:53 AM My twin flame, my dear wife for 35 years died 2 years ago. Your poem reflects our love perfectly. Thanks Lin. Lin Lane March 3, 2016 at 6:59 AM Thank you for sharing this with me, Gabriel. Your 35 years together is a treasure for you to remember. I'm happy that you like this one. ;)

Jill Spagnola March 3, 2016 at 5:34 AM I always like a second chance :), jill Lin Lane March 3, 2016 at 5:36 AM It seemed to work for them. Thanks, Jill. ;)