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Twin Flames Burned

Long ago they met
a night filled with sweet romance
igniting two flames
life took them separate ways
fire cooled, dwindled to embers

sparks flew once again
when fate threw them together
rekindling the fire
cherished love led to marriage
twin flames burned: deep in each heart


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March 3, 2016
Twin Flames:   Nayda

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2016

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Vladislav Raven Date: 3/15/2016 8:17:00 AM Hi Lin, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Such a simply beautiful piece Lin, well crafted. I enjoyed the read. A seven from me Lin....Vlad. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 3/13/2016 2:12:00 PM Congratulations again Lin, fine work. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/13/2016 6:30:00 PM Thank you, Charlie.

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/13/2016 12:31:00 PM Lin, many congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/13/2016 6:29:00 PM Thanks a bunch, Laura.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/13/2016 11:33:00 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/13/2016 6:29:00 PM Thanks, Nayda.

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/7/2016 10:15:00 PM A sweet story about love found, lost, then gained again. Love cooling is better than love being extinguished. The embers analogy is poignant. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/8/2016 2:43:00 AM If it was love in the first place, there's always an ember. Twas so with me, but better off not having them fanned. Thanks for visiting me.

Susan Palli Date: 3/5/2016 7:21:00 AM So beautiful. I love love stories! Thanks Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/8/2016 2:42:00 AM Thank you very much, Susan.

Eve Roper Date: 3/4/2016 8:08:00 PM Lin, very good romantic verse a 7 ;good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/5/2016 2:03:00 AM Thanks, sweet friend.

Daniel Turner Date: 3/3/2016 7:21:00 AM My second chance burned too hot and burned completely up then there was nothing left but one flame. Lovely tankas and am so happy you are happy. Love to you my sweet Georgia Peach:) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/3/2016 7:47:00 AM Thanks, Danny. One flame in my own heart is enough for me.

Gabriel Sundman Date: 3/3/2016 6:53:00 AM My twin flame, my dear wife for 35 years died 2 years ago. Your poem reflects our love perfectly. Thanks Lin. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/3/2016 6:59:00 AM Thank you for sharing this with me, Gabriel. Your 35 years together is a treasure for you to remember. I'm happy that you like this one. ;)

Jill Spagnola Date: 3/3/2016 5:34:00 AM I always like a second chance :), jill Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/3/2016 5:36:00 AM It seemed to work for them. Thanks, Jill. ;)