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Twin Flames Burned

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Long ago they met a night filled with sweet romance igniting two flames life took them separate ways fire cooled, dwindled to embers sparks flew once again when fate threw them together rekindling the fire cherished love led to marriage twin flames burned: deep in each heart :___________________: March 3, 2016 Twin Flames: Nayda

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/15/2016 8:17:00 AM

Hi Lin, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Such a simply beautiful piece Lin, well crafted. I enjoyed the read. A seven from me Lin....Vlad.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/13/2016 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations again Lin, fine work.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 6:30:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/13/2016 12:31:00 PM

Lin, many congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Laura.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/13/2016 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks, Nayda.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/7/2016 10:15:00 PM

A sweet story about love found, lost, then gained again. Love cooling is better than love being extinguished. The embers analogy is poignant.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2016 2:43:00 AM

If it was love in the first place, there's always an ember. Twas so with me, but better off not having them fanned. Thanks for visiting me.

Susan Palli

Date: 3/5/2016 7:21:00 AM

So beautiful. I love love stories! Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2016 2:42:00 AM

Thank you very much, Susan.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/4/2016 8:08:00 PM

Lin, very good romantic verse a 7 ;good luck in the contest.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/5/2016 2:03:00 AM

Thanks, sweet friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/3/2016 7:21:00 AM

My second chance burned too hot and burned completely up then there was nothing left but one flame. Lovely tankas and am so happy you are happy. Love to you my sweet Georgia Peach:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/3/2016 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Danny. One flame in my own heart is enough for me.

Gabriel Sundman

Date: 3/3/2016 6:53:00 AM

My twin flame, my dear wife for 35 years died 2 years ago. Your poem reflects our love perfectly. Thanks Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/3/2016 6:59:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this with me, Gabriel. Your 35 years together is a treasure for you to remember. I'm happy that you like this one. ;)

Jill Spagnola

Date: 3/3/2016 5:34:00 AM

I always like a second chance :), jill

Lin Lane
Date: 3/3/2016 5:36:00 AM

It seemed to work for them. Thanks, Jill. ;)