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Twilight's Song

From twilight's song comes Luna's rise As moonlight rhythms play on high Stars join in with twinkling chimes As galaxies swirl with a far away sigh Ocean's dance in moonlight's glimmer Waltzing to the shore Luna reflect ocean's shimmer as the melody begins once more 4-2-2024

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/3/2024 11:34:00 AM

A top notch poem. I liked rhythmic roll of the words.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/3/2024 1:54:00 AM

The ocean attracted by the stars, produces a haunting melody. Loved the sound.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/2/2024 5:29:00 PM

I love watching the moon rise. Some would say that I'm a moon watcher, a dreamer of sorts :-) So, I found your poem gratifying. I loved Ocean's dance in moonlight's glimmer Waltzing to the shore. Your poem had a dreamy quality as well. I obviously liked it. Have a great evening, Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/2/2024 1:12:00 PM

' As galaxies swirl, the melody begins once more. ' This image is magical and dreamy, all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/2/2024 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful images scintillating in twilight. I hear the sound of melodies through your verse waltzing in moonlight.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/2/2024 1:00:00 PM

Ah beautiful, I absolutely love a moon poem always and one with ocean too, i just wrote a little poem too while listening to the waves sing and moon shimmer, moon always inspires so many. Pleasure reading this gem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2024 11:11:00 AM

- A beautiful sight you describe, Joseph :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/2/2024 10:57:00 AM

Lovely, Joe!