Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Light Verse

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Twilight's Aurora

TWILIGHT'S AURORA

From the yawning west horizon stretch, 
orange to red streaks painting the blue skies
Fleeting dragonflies flirt with the swaying breeze
as so the dives and glides from flock of starlings 

Billowy to feather clouds unite
in a cosmic godly assemble rite.
The standing sound wind runs to blow
as the amber flames beneath the ashes glow.

Darkness inches it's way and wrath,
the lone farmer on the field then hurry to his path
as before the sunset, he needs to be home fast.
Crickets stalked with their wafting chants in the air

suddenly, soppy dew globules descends to the ground
crumbling to reach the parched earth bounds,
Drenched and tired after lots of strides
serenity falls to the farmer after the globules dried

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Sponsor	Kelly Deschler
Contest Name	Simply Beautiful 
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6:10 pm, March 24, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2015 at 3:10 AM OOOLLLIIIVVVEEEEE, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:59 AM hugs bcak and thanks.. =')!

Sandra Haight April 6, 2015 at 10:51 AM Such beautiful imagery, Olive. You painted a lovely picture right before my eyes with your poetic words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:58 AM thank you so much Sandra so are your poems.. =')!

Jan Allison April 6, 2015 at 9:58 AM Dropping back with my congrats Olive hope you see this sight for real soon:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:57 AM I've seen this lots of times.. =')! thanks!hugs back@

Maurice Yvonne April 6, 2015 at 9:39 AM This is definetely 'simply beautiful', congratulations on your well deserved win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:53 AM thanks much MAurice.. =')!

Joseph May April 5, 2015 at 9:12 PM Beautiful write Olive ..congrats on your win.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM thanks much Joseph.. =')!

Kelly Deschler April 5, 2015 at 7:36 PM Such vivid and striking imagery! I could see it all so clearly as I read these lines... A wonderful poem, Olive! Congrats on your win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 13, 2015 at 8:44 AM thank you so much Kelly. :)!

Paul Callus March 25, 2015 at 4:28 PM Top marks for a beautiful poem filled with captivating imagery! Immensely enjoyed!! Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 26, 2015 at 5:07 AM Thank you so much Paul.. :) always appreciate your drop by.. :)!//olive eloisa

Kim Shaw March 24, 2015 at 7:23 PM Hi Olive, this was such a joy to read and experience! Loved every line. Hugs, Kimberly Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 26, 2015 at 5:00 AM Thanks much Kimberly.. I am so glad you enjoyed it.. :)! hugs back~olive eloisa

James Fraser March 24, 2015 at 3:49 PM Two images captured so beautifully through your words. The imagery you've added brings them alive even more. It's quite a bridge, and close by one does see Starlings flock and swarm in the Summer evenings of which both you'll witness soon. LoVe this Oliz, ((( warm hugs ))) ;-) // Dino James // xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 26, 2015 at 4:57 AM Thank you so much James.. :)! weeeeeee!!! og yes i hope to witness these all and hoping I'll be with my lifetime partner.. :)! hugs.. olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser March 24, 2015 at 8:25 AM This was a lovely tour through a word-painting. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 26, 2015 at 4:51 AM Thanks much M. L. Kiser.. I am so glad you like it.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 24, 2015 at 8:13 AM Wow Olive wonderful imagery n a poem! Lovely pics here,, gl in contest dear! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 26, 2015 at 4:50 AM Thanks much Dr. Upma.. :) I so appreciate you dropping by,.. :)! hugs!

Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 7:53 AM Olive the image and the imagery are DIVINE - absolutely charming to read ! Hugs jan xx 7 xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 25, 2015 at 3:47 AM Thanks so much sweet Jan.. :)! hugs back tight and warm.. :D!