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TWILIGHT'S AURORA From the yawning west horizon stretch, orange to red streaks painting the blue skies Fleeting dragonflies flirt with the swaying breeze as so the dives and glides from flock of starlings Billowy to feather clouds unite in a cosmic godly assemble rite. The standing sound wind runs to blow as the amber flames beneath the ashes glow. Darkness inches it's way and wrath, the lone farmer on the field then hurry to his path as before the sunset, he needs to be home fast. Crickets stalked with their wafting chants in the air suddenly, soppy dew globules descends to the ground crumbling to reach the parched earth bounds, Drenched and tired after lots of strides serenity falls to the farmer after the globules dried _________________________________________________ Sponsor Kelly Deschler Contest Name Simply Beautiful ---Placed 3rd--- 6:10 pm, March 24, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 3:10:00 AM

OOOLLLIIIVVVEEEEE, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:59:00 AM

hugs bcak and thanks.. =')!

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/6/2015 10:51:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery, Olive. You painted a lovely picture right before my eyes with your poetic words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:58:00 AM

thank you so much Sandra so are your poems.. =')!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2015 9:58:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive hope you see this sight for real soon:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:57:00 AM

I've seen this lots of times.. =')! thanks!hugs back@

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/6/2015 9:39:00 AM

This is definetely 'simply beautiful', congratulations on your well deserved win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:53:00 AM

thanks much MAurice.. =')!

Joseph May

Date: 4/5/2015 9:12:00 PM

Beautiful write Olive ..congrats on your win..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:52:00 AM

thanks much Joseph.. =')!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2015 7:36:00 PM

Such vivid and striking imagery! I could see it all so clearly as I read these lines... A wonderful poem, Olive! Congrats on your win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2015 8:44:00 AM

thank you so much Kelly. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2015 4:28:00 PM

Top marks for a beautiful poem filled with captivating imagery! Immensely enjoyed!! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul.. :) always appreciate your drop by.. :)!//olive eloisa

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/24/2015 7:23:00 PM

Hi Olive, this was such a joy to read and experience! Loved every line. Hugs, Kimberly

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 5:00:00 AM

Thanks much Kimberly.. I am so glad you enjoyed it.. :)! hugs back~olive eloisa

James Fraser

Date: 3/24/2015 3:49:00 PM

Two images captured so beautifully through your words. The imagery you've added brings them alive even more. It's quite a bridge, and close by one does see Starlings flock and swarm in the Summer evenings of which both you'll witness soon. LoVe this Oliz, ((( warm hugs ))) ;-) // Dino James // xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much James.. :)! weeeeeee!!! og yes i hope to witness these all and hoping I'll be with my lifetime partner.. :)! hugs.. olive eloisa