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Twilight Zone

Last golden Sun drop
licked by the deep blue mountains,
ocean's blue thirsty 
now,for twilight's golden dew;
blue sky turning to pure gold.



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Andrea Dietrich

May 6, 2013 at 2:14 PM

aha, and I found a GOLD poem of yours as well!! Kash, do you remember? I wait and enter my contests according to the 'number"of the entry. I am waiting for a good number with the grape contest!!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

May 8, 2011 at 9:10 AM

A very poetic and original write! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem, "Waiting For You." You ask, did she turn up? Well, no...but the characters are fictional anyway! Regards, Robert.

James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 11:33 AM

Many congratulation's Kashinath on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

March 23, 2011 at 8:47 PM

Great to see your poem honored HM. Kashinath, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2011 at 9:02 AM

You did a superb job with this poem, Kashinath. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2011 at 5:03 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Kashinath in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2011 at 10:33 PM

Congrats on your HM, Kash. There was a lot of competition in this one. My birdie did not make the list at all. haha. You had some great images in yours! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

March 22, 2011 at 9:01 PM

beautiful image kashi. Very warm congrats for this win.

Francine Roberts

March 22, 2011 at 4:36 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Kashinath

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2011 at 3:44 PM

Very descriptive and creative work..Congratulations on your win...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 22, 2011 at 12:39 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your HM in the blue and gold contest my friend.. awesome words depicting the colors so well luv.. enjoy your very special honor..

Gwendolen Song

March 22, 2011 at 12:35 PM

Dear Kashinath, Great angle on this poem...much enjoyed your creative use of thirst. Congrats to U. Gwendolen

Jack Horne

March 22, 2011 at 10:49 AM

Many congrats on your win : ) Jack

Audrey Haick

March 22, 2011 at 10:41 AM

Congratulations on your HM Win in Rick's "Blue and Gold" Contest, Kashinath. Beautiful Tanka! Always, Annalise

Phyllis Babcock

March 6, 2011 at 2:20 PM

Loved the description on this lovely poem. God Bless Phyl

Wilma Neels

March 5, 2011 at 11:07 AM

Another stunner Kash and aptly titled as well. I really enjoy your descriptive lines, thank you for sharing them :) Wilma

George Aul

March 5, 2011 at 8:48 AM

A very good descriptive poem....George

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2011 at 9:47 PM

Very nice, Kashinath. I like the way your personified the Sun and had it licking the mountains. Rick has some wonderful entries and yours is certainly among them. Constance said "nature" included animals on her contest page. That's why I wrote about the cat. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 4, 2011 at 10:51 AM

Blue and gold, apt images for the twilight zone, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

March 4, 2011 at 8:50 AM

overflowing with rich images of nature's magic.. and this is magical too, kashi....my pages miss you! great winning wishes in the contest!whooot! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2011 at 7:35 AM

Kash, this is very descriptive. Love the colors. I am still thinking about this one. I need to get to work on it quickly. I loved the second line, Great personification there. (no need for the comma line four). It's nice to finally get to see poems this morning. It's like I am withdrawing from drugs when I can't come on here late at night to see poems!