Twilight Zone

Last golden Sun drop
licked by the deep blue mountains,
ocean's blue thirsty 
now,for twilight's golden dew;
blue sky turning to pure gold.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/6/2013 2:14:00 PM
aha, and I found a GOLD poem of yours as well!! Kash, do you remember? I wait and enter my contests according to the 'number"of the entry. I am waiting for a good number with the grape contest!!
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:10:00 AM
A very poetic and original write! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem, "Waiting For You." You ask, did she turn up? Well, no...but the characters are fictional anyway! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:33:00 AM
Many congratulation's Kashinath on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:47:00 PM
Great to see your poem honored HM. Kashinath, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2011 9:02:00 AM
You did a superb job with this poem, Kashinath. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2011 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kashinath in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Kash. There was a lot of competition in this one. My birdie did not make the list at all. haha. You had some great images in yours! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:01:00 PM
beautiful image kashi. Very warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/22/2011 4:36:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Kashinath
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Date: 3/22/2011 3:44:00 PM
Very descriptive and creative work..Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your HM in the blue and gold contest my friend.. awesome words depicting the colors so well luv.. enjoy your very special honor..
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:35:00 PM
Dear Kashinath, Great angle on this poem...much enjoyed your creative use of thirst. Congrats to U. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/22/2011 10:49:00 AM
Many congrats on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 3/22/2011 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Win in Rick's "Blue and Gold" Contest, Kashinath. Beautiful Tanka! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:20:00 PM
Loved the description on this lovely poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:07:00 AM
Another stunner Kash and aptly titled as well. I really enjoy your descriptive lines, thank you for sharing them :) Wilma
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Date: 3/5/2011 8:48:00 AM
A very good descriptive poem....George
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Date: 3/4/2011 9:47:00 PM
Very nice, Kashinath. I like the way your personified the Sun and had it licking the mountains. Rick has some wonderful entries and yours is certainly among them. Constance said "nature" included animals on her contest page. That's why I wrote about the cat. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:51:00 AM
Blue and gold, apt images for the twilight zone, kashinath
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:50:00 AM
overflowing with rich images of nature's magic.. and this is magical too, kashi....my pages miss you! great winning wishes in the contest!whooot! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/4/2011 7:35:00 AM
Kash, this is very descriptive. Love the colors. I am still thinking about this one. I need to get to work on it quickly. I loved the second line, Great personification there. (no need for the comma line four). It's nice to finally get to see poems this morning. It's like I am withdrawing from drugs when I can't come on here late at night to see poems!
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Date: 3/4/2011 7:27:00 AM
Very descriptive and creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn...Sara
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:30:00 AM
Breathtaking Tanka Kashinath and good luck in Rick's contest.. wonderful expressions and a magnificent title luv..
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:57:00 AM
Wow Kash a lovely take on this contest.
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:37:00 PM
Should do well in Rick's contest. CGH
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