Get Your Premium Membership

Twilight Shadows

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.


Dawn returns the light stolen by twilight shadows. With the stars still bright and the bats in flight; Sol shows. And lured by daylight; butterflies alight and pose. Sunbeams stroke each rose, as though they were froze in time. And scented primrose flowers make meadows sublime. Sweet odors arose and tickled my nose; Springtime. Nature in Her prime; a perfect, Showtime delight. Though night flees in time, church bells and owls chime; goodnight. And Sol starts to climb, imbuing daytime with light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/12/2023 1:07:00 AM
loving your shadows... Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 4/12/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2023 8:27:00 PM
Enjoyed, Emile! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2023 6:51:00 AM
Wow! You have done this perfectly, Emile:)
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2023 6:10:00 PM
this is very well written, Emile making it very easy and enjoyable. best for a win my friend:)
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2023 3:28:00 PM
Very descriptive Virelai Emile. Perfectly done. Beautiful theme for the contest, the coming of daylight, the fading of night. Best wishes.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Wendy, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2023 1:19:00 PM
This is a lovely read, the title caught my eye right away. Beautiful write and good to you in the contest :)
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, Hat, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry