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Twilight Rose

Softest haze mantles the night amid twilights first born hours.
Dew all drenching, encroach, caress the springs first waking flowers.
Mists so gently kiss the foliage of a garden fair, as one comes hither
purest rose adorns her silken hair.

Shift of satin, unkempt curls, she steps with even grace.
Eyes of lonely, haunting beauty, beset by youthful face.
Tranquility abounds around her in vividly elusive dreams.
When awoken, shattered then.... as nothings what it seems.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/26/2017 1:34:00 PM
I can see her gliding over the morning dew. Beautiful.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/28/2017 10:35:00 AM
thank you, Joe.
Date: 12/3/2016 8:26:00 AM
This has a peaceful feel to it, stirring the imagination ... the final line is a bit of a surprise and leaves me wondering...
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 2/20/2017 7:28:00 PM
It's just a portrait of that feeling of having a dream seem so real and so perfect, so peaceful and great, and then waking up to finding none of it was real at all. "what? I'm rich! yes!!!.... wait.....oooohhhhhh mmmannn" :)
Date: 7/2/2016 2:40:00 AM
Hi Jesse, I was captivated by the title. Unique and all yours. Felt like I was absorbing a still moment... Enjoyed. LINDA
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/2/2016 12:41:00 PM
thank you, Linda. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 6/21/2016 11:45:00 AM
Jesse, a melodic poem which drifts throughout the air playing music which sounds beautiful to our ears. ~ Sonia
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 6/21/2016 2:02:00 PM
glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 6/21/2016 6:24:00 AM
The imagery is wonderful and soft... Awesome write, Skat
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 6/21/2016 2:03:00 PM
thank you, Skat. glad you liked it