Twilight Lullaby

The night’s stillness beckons her
Promising a warm lingering embrace
Doleful her heart listens captivated
Entranced by languorous mournful lyrics
Reaching deep into her soul
No louder than her heartbeat
Her brazen midnight lover bellows
Ever so quietly and seductively
His soothing enigmatic twilight lullaby



AP: 1st place 2022

Submitted on August 11, 2018 for contest MID AUGUST STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on March 6, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/17/2018 6:31:00 AM
Line, I love the beauty and sensitivity in this piece of work, a well deserved win. Faux
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you, Faxu, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/15/2018 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. That's a lullaby worth waiting for. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/14/2018 10:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Line-- a most intriguing poem!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/14/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, LJ. I like the word intriguing. LOL
Date: 3/10/2018 2:26:00 AM
Very nice write :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Debbie.
Date: 3/7/2018 6:37:00 AM
beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2018 6:38:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, Mike.
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