Twilight Love

Shadows in twilight turned to black and white
Inside the house looking out of the window down the street
Waiting impatiently for her future to drive up the driveway

An arched back stretches to infinity
Kneeling over the love-seat with circumventing thoughts 
To not spoil the reality of what's to be

Half-naked half-clothed feminine beauty 
Waiting for time to start moving once again
And experience love for the first time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Souls Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Thanks everyone, sorry it took me so long to respond. I really appreciate all the comments and being featured. :)
Adeite Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 7:24 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Adeite Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 7:21 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Richards Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 4:51 PM
This is amazing work....so glad I caught this one! Congratulations on being a featured poet this week! ~ Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 12:16 PM
I love it, congratulations on being a featutred artist.
Fraser Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week, Anthony S. ...and shadows of black and white live forever until never... maybe. Interesting and sensuous poem. DAS-J
Jordan Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Anthony congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Mason Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Love the 3rd line ... smile ... wonderful write here, Anthony and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
Joseph Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:12 AM
congrats - erotic - makes the reader want to know more.....
Bien Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Good write Anthony. Congrats! JB
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 6:35 AM
Nicely written featured piece. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Anthony. Love Carol
Al-Riyami Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 1:42 PM
The ending Is Lusty<33
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