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Twilight Love

Shadows in twilight turned to black and white Inside the house looking out of the window down the street Waiting impatiently for her future to drive up the driveway An arched back stretches to infinity Kneeling over the love-seat with circumventing thoughts To not spoil the reality of what's to be Half-naked half-clothed feminine beauty Waiting for time to start moving once again And experience love for the first time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 1:19:00 PM
Thanks everyone, sorry it took me so long to respond. I really appreciate all the comments and being featured. :)
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:21:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/18/2009 4:51:00 PM
This is amazing work....so glad I caught this one! Congratulations on being a featured poet this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:16:00 PM
I love it, congratulations on being a featutred artist.
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Date: 8/18/2009 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week, Anthony S. ...and shadows of black and white live forever until never... maybe. Interesting and sensuous poem. DAS-J
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:11:00 PM
Anthony congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:30:00 PM
Love the 3rd line ... smile ... wonderful write here, Anthony and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:12:00 AM
congrats - erotic - makes the reader want to know more.....
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:39:00 AM
Good write Anthony. Congrats! JB
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:35:00 AM
Nicely written featured piece. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Anthony. Love Carol
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:42:00 PM
The ending Is Lusty<33
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