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Twilight Love

shadows approaching
stars are shining, mercy me
sparkling moonlit lake

a mass surrender
as pink lilies bloom lately
and I can see mars

once again I am
falling in love with the night
moonlit roses wow

though time is crawling
sweet destiny still summons
in evening shadows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Twilight time -- unique opportunity for love and mystery! Thanks, Evelyn. :) gw
Buehler Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:23 PM
You are most welcome. Thank you very much for your thoughts.
Hawkins Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Twilight time....Fleeting but magical. Lovely Evelyn.... Thank you.
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:04 PM
You're very welcome, Shirley. Thank you for the compliment.
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 12:48 PM
You are a master of haiku. I really loved the imagery in this you never disappoint.
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thank you for your wonderful complimentary remarks Karen. Most appreciated.
Proxenos Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 8:41 AM
A very thought provoking poem with rich creative thoughts and messages. Hugs and blessings Judy, Jennifer
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Beautifully written, Evelyn...full of symbolism, rhythm, and color. Thank you for sharing it!
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:03 AM
It is my joy to share. Thank you for the uplifting comment, Lasaad.
Horsman Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:57 AM
Not a big fan of a picture with a poem, Evelyn. like to use my imagination, yet this is so lovely so blending with colour and mind.
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:06 AM
I am thrilled that you liked this, Harry. Thank you so much.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Nothing is lovelier than a scene from twilight.
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:08 AM
I completely agree. :D
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