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Twilight In the Pines

A dusky passage, winding streets, ventured by merlot, Walking through the alley, a blind man will go. Nights bliss walks a homeless man, chin up, heart so kind, Imagination through the pine trees, trails he can only find. The chirping of the crickets as woodland creatures scour, Serene, Rim top camping, a peaceful midnight hour. Pallets on fire, mice scattered thru the street, Carried on, a blind man, Mother Nature’s his retreat. To the left he will climb, finding shelter from the bears, Excitement from a childhood, reminiscing tears. Died down local traffic, no honking of the cars, Desolate, departed streets, corralled in the bars. Best part of the day, a nature hike, his life’s highlight, Walking the streets smiles a blind man, his enchanting twilight. Twilight- Poetry Contest Dated 09-23-2016

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Date: 6/26/2017 5:07:00 PM
I loved the chirping or the crickets in the wood land.This is my favourite line, of your poem.
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:32:00 AM
Very cool write loved the flowetry in your poetry
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/5/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much! I hope it enlightened your day! ( :
Date: 9/29/2016 10:33:00 PM
very nice poem
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/30/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Sharon!! ( :
Date: 9/28/2016 10:32:00 PM
For sure, true beauty comes from a place beneath the surface. Closer to the veins and heart of spirit.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/29/2016 12:49:00 PM
I appreciate it Joe!! Thank You! ( :
Date: 9/27/2016 2:33:00 PM
Blind but able to enjoy all of nature. That is heartwarming, Chelcie!
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/27/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea!
Date: 9/25/2016 9:23:00 PM
I agree. Hiking is "best part of the day"
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/26/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you! Glad you liked it ( :
Date: 9/25/2016 11:36:00 AM
lovely poem Chelcie :) congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/25/2016 11:48:00 AM
Hi Laura! I'm so happy you liked it.....I LOVE writing!!! ( :
Date: 9/25/2016 3:46:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Chelcie.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/25/2016 11:46:00 AM
Good Morning Agnes! Thank you very much! Hope you have a great day! ( :
Date: 9/25/2016 1:34:00 AM
wondeful write, Chelcie. Best wishes for the contest. A7 from me............//hugs
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/25/2016 11:45:00 AM
Aww thank you so much!! I really appreciate it! Hugs!
Date: 9/24/2016 11:34:00 PM
A fantastic write Chelcie, :) I was moved with the strength he holds on the second couplet set. A 7.... perfect way to end the poem. LINDA
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/24/2016 11:46:00 PM
Thank you so so much Linda!! I'm so glad you liked it!! ( :
Date: 9/24/2016 7:48:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your placement Chelcie. I love this poem:)
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/24/2016 7:57:00 PM
I am SO happy you enjoyed it!! I really appreciate you taking the time to bring a smile to my face! ( :
Date: 9/24/2016 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations Chelcie on the placement of the contest.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/24/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much!! ( :
Date: 9/23/2016 4:03:00 PM
A very emotive write, Chelcie. Reminding us all how thankful we should be. Well done!
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/23/2016 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel! ( :

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