Kash Poet Poet Than-Bauk

Twilight Her Name

A soft whisper
from the far sky
like her love talk.

I turn my head
crimson red sky
now spreads its wings.

Twilight her name
a sweet dame's call
don't blame me...bye.



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Hellen Masido May 11, 2012 at 4:22 PM wow! Beautiful poem!i especially loved stanza 2!a really beautiful picture!

Terry L. Allen May 7, 2012 at 1:34 PM Today you are my muse and with this poem you have made one come from me. I will post it in a little bit. I love the picture that this gave to me. May the beauty of many a sunset be yours. Huggs TLee

Sara Kendrick April 19, 2012 at 4:34 PM Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi April 19, 2012 at 3:57 PM A coy ending ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 5:30 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2012 at 1:54 PM yeyy, congrats on your win in my contest, kashi... something went wrong with the TPS settings; good thing it was repaired!!.. awwright!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2012 at 6:08 PM aha, GOOD, Kash, you put a better rhyming word in the middle one's last line. Me likes!!

Nette Onclaud April 17, 2012 at 2:22 PM yayyyy!.... thanks for entering, kashi buddy!!.. come over!..:) huggs!

Dinda Minardi April 17, 2012 at 8:02 AM I can feel her, teasing.. a great sweet writing, Kash. Re my 'I wouldn't say that' yes, I was angry when I wrote it! Good guess :)

Chittaranjan Dey April 17, 2012 at 12:54 AM Great dear poet. Really nice.

Joyce Johnson April 17, 2012 at 12:09 AM Great entry for the contest. Good luck and thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2012 at 11:56 PM Lovely and soft words in this poem kash,wish you all the best in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2012 at 11:48 PM that bird is not a her, it's a him, a kisser of flowers, remember? heehee. Well, Kash, I am outta here!!!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2012 at 11:03 PM yours is really nice, Kash.very romantic. soupmail.

Nancy Jones April 16, 2012 at 5:11 PM lol... nice one!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 4:11 PM Such a beautiful whisper of love, Kash! Terrific! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Ann Roske April 16, 2012 at 8:25 AM you paint a beautiful image Kash - enjoyed this write.

Elizabeth Wesley April 16, 2012 at 8:25 AM Soft and sweet Kashi, twilight perfectly portrayed here!