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Twilight Dance

Slipping quietly through the forest, I saw sparkles soar and twirl. I rubbed my eyes in disbelief Since stars don't sit that near to earth. Silently, I crept still closer Until tiny delicate forms appeared. I stared wide eyed as they pranced, Sprinkling dew and closing buds. Strokes soft as angel's breath Gentle artists of the twilight I reached out to touch Silver glimmering wings And woke alone in my bed The morning sun on my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/4/2010 4:42:00 AM
Congrats for the win. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:49:00 PM
wow this is beautiful. I would have placed it higher up on the list. Congrats. Andrea
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Date: 3/29/2010 12:19:00 AM
There is always a wonderful meaning in all of our dreams, nice sharing this to us, Christi and congratulations to your winning. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:40:00 PM
Congrats Christi on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:53:00 PM
Lovely pictuire you drew. Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2010 9:02:00 AM
you sure are showing your creativity...I'm so proud of you Baby Doll.
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Date: 3/11/2010 9:04:00 PM
A wonderful poem, I liked the ending..
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