Twilight Hour

Remember TWILIGHT HOUR walking home. US two alone At DUSK. Dark and US. You were loving me I was loving you. We were loving we Those months drifted by SLIGHTLY to soon. Remember the sunset. Remember the laureling Remember EVERYTHING THE LAURELING LAUREATE! SUNSET that was it! You were great. It's getting LATE. WE SHOULD GO. YEAH, I KNOW. DAWN IS COMING. Can't wait 'til SUNRISE TWILIGHT HOUR

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 3:40:00 PM

Hi VAL, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/5/2015 5:00:00 PM

Hey Linda thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your inspirational comments. How many ways can I say THANK YOU. V.B Rogers

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/10/2015 9:47:00 PM

I remember twilight morns with my sweety. Just before dawn, the early morning tango.. Always was my favorite time with my love.. A7 and truth in the telling--that's real poetry my friend..

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/5/2015 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Robert. Your commment means more than just a compliment to me.

Graphite Drug

Date: 1/6/2015 6:56:00 PM

Your work reads more like performance, spoken word, than disciplined writing. It is difficult for some to write in such style, but suits you well. Are there canonical texts you draw from or are you improvising? Great work!

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 1/6/2015 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Graphite Drug. Improvising. I write it by hand initially. Then copy it to computer.