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Twilight

Twilight's shadows prick awareness a prelude to the night descending as day hesitates before it's passing. Curtains of the sunset are drawn over the horizon as colors of day dissolve into blackness of night. Early evening sky is hushed as cool air surrounds the moon and stars light winds whisper twilight tunes in unison. Plaintive hoots of an owl are heard while a small chorus of crickets chirp in steady tempo accompanied by bullfrogs. Earthy music of nature floats hither and yon a symphony of secrets, briefly revealed twilight mysteries linger as long notes fade softly into the vast chasm of time. Written on 9/22/2016

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Date: 1/28/2020 10:18:00 AM
Such a lovely curved piece Laura, I really liked this one. Trust life is good in San Diego, Many blessings from Scotland and so good to meet fellow believer, Gordon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon! There are many believers on PS, as well. Your kind words mean a lot to me! God bless! :)
Date: 10/16/2016 1:36:00 PM
Laura, absolutely beautiful, congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/14/2016 7:25:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Laura - congrats on your win. Agnes
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/14/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes :)
Date: 9/23/2016 8:31:00 PM
Nice and very evocative work here. I like the phrase , "A symphony of secrets" a lot Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/23/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Matthew! I wanted it to sound a little mysterious ;)
Date: 9/22/2016 3:37:00 PM
Laura, this is so descriptive and LOVELY--a 7! Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/22/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! Your kind words encourage me :)

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