Twilight

back-lit birch and pine
pierced with autumn's red and gold
tremble beneath clouds 
my broken heart weeps like rain
a lone loon calls revelry

natureseasonstanka

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Debbie Duncan

October 21, 2012 at 7:18 PM

Love it ,,,,, you have a blessed day Debbie ;}

Tanya Harrington

October 16, 2012 at 1:04 PM

Very lovely. Congrats on your win! :) Tanya

Nette Onclaud

October 15, 2012 at 2:25 AM

twilight inspires!..clappies for your win, debbie!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 14, 2012 at 4:15 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Polly Plafcan

October 13, 2012 at 10:06 PM

How lovely. Look forward to reading more of your work. pvp

Lee Ramage

October 13, 2012 at 10:03 PM

beautiful poem Debbie, well done and congrats on your first place win. lee

Olusegun Arowolo

October 12, 2012 at 3:30 PM

Wonderful and intriguing write,Debbie..Congratulations on your well deserved win....

Joy Wellington

October 12, 2012 at 10:09 AM

A1 win for an A1 write, Debbie. Congrats!! One love. Joy Wells

Kash Poet

October 12, 2012 at 7:36 AM

You are dazzling at the TOP with this beautiful Tanka Debi !Congrats on your top win.

Modupe Sefunmi

October 12, 2012 at 2:27 AM

Congrats on your win with this awesome Tanka!

Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2012 at 12:16 AM

Awesome, Debs!!! Congratulations.

Tahera Mannan

October 11, 2012 at 11:07 PM

Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.

Joyce Johnson

October 11, 2012 at 10:36 PM

Congratulations Debbie. I'll have to do some reading up on the Tanka, so I can be as clever as you, but maybe the run on them will be over soon. Love, Joyce