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Twilight

back-lit birch and pine pierced with autumn's red and gold tremble beneath clouds my broken heart weeps like rain a lone loon calls revelry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 7:18:00 PM
Love it ,,,,, you have a blessed day Debbie ;}
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Date: 10/16/2012 1:04:00 PM
Very lovely. Congrats on your win! :) Tanya
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Date: 10/15/2012 2:25:00 AM
twilight inspires!..clappies for your win, debbie!
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:15:00 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
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Date: 10/13/2012 10:06:00 PM
How lovely. Look forward to reading more of your work. pvp
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Date: 10/13/2012 10:03:00 PM
beautiful poem Debbie, well done and congrats on your first place win. lee
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Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM
Wonderful and intriguing write,Debbie..Congratulations on your well deserved win....
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Date: 10/12/2012 10:09:00 AM
A1 win for an A1 write, Debbie. Congrats!! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/12/2012 7:36:00 AM
You are dazzling at the TOP with this beautiful Tanka Debi !Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/12/2012 2:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this awesome Tanka!
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Date: 10/12/2012 12:16:00 AM
Awesome, Debs!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/11/2012 11:07:00 PM
Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.
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Date: 10/11/2012 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. I'll have to do some reading up on the Tanka, so I can be as clever as you, but maybe the run on them will be over soon. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/11/2012 10:36:00 PM
Lovely! I like the way you've eased into the second part. Nice! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/11/2012 6:45:00 PM
a wonderful poem and a well-deserved win! congratulations!
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Date: 10/11/2012 6:19:00 PM
wonderful write......I like the" weeps like rain" line.....congrats on a great win...
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Date: 10/11/2012 3:20:00 PM
Chris A. is an excellent tutor XXXOOO
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Date: 10/11/2012 3:12:00 PM
Just exquisite in your images - congratulations.
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Date: 10/11/2012 1:45:00 PM
Whew, Deb!...got me a little misty eyed here...absolutely perfectly done...each line is exquisite...many congrats - Tim
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:37:00 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:35:00 PM
this is amazing.....congrats on ur win...:))))
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Date: 10/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
So descriptive of a beautiful but sad (for me) time of the year! Great... love, Jack
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Date: 10/5/2012 2:46:00 AM
I'm no expert, but it sounds lovely Debbie - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:24:00 PM
Wow!!Great !Best wishes .
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