Twilight

...inspired by 'Fireside' by Seamus Heaney


Flashlight tracings trap and dazzle,
dancing in the twilight. Children hurry
through the meadow, flip-flops flapping,
eager beavers chasing dreams.

Quick the flow, the stream blinks
back a hint of moonlight,
and the torches' criss cross
patterns scatter 'til the beams converge.

Nets are plied, and mason jars
are dunked beneath the rippling surface, 
small fish wriggle in confinement
midst excitement and delight.

Safe and snug, imaginations settle
as they say goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/15/2009 6:10:00 AM
Keith, thank you for writing and posting this exciting poem. So full of life and wonderment. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2009 7:41:00 PM
a comforting country verse! Keith, nice, jim
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Date: 7/1/2009 6:41:00 PM
Oh what wonderful memories you've made young man. I hope you have some grandkids to plop in the middle of them.
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Date: 6/24/2009 5:03:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 6/22/2009 8:48:00 AM
=] ethereal beauty mixed with the commonplace -GIVEN to the commonplace. I love this, Keith. Your talent never ceases to amaze me.
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