"twice Loved"

My Dearest Most Beloved Barbara,                                            
My broken heart began to live again                                             
Filtering  the Heat of Life: Once more                                          
Holding hands, beside YOU ; I Stand                                        
To Know once again: LOVE is Grand                                       
See LOVE reflecting from Your Eyes                                     
Caressing the beach of Sandy blond hair                              
Sweet smell of LOVE wafting in the Air    
Everlasting LOVE forYOU
         ~~~~~~~~~~~~                            
My Dearest Only Beloved Lenore
My Love for You is Always True
My Heart beats for You in “ ETERNITY “
The LOVE I Feel, Just Holding Your Hand
I shout of my LOVE; TO  “ GOD  ABOVE “
Your long flowing Auburn Hair, Lariats : ME!
Jade-Emerald : EYES : Piercing my Heart with Love
Your  “ WOMANHOOD “ ,  still wafts in my Nostrils
I am “ FOREVER WITH YOU “  as YOU are " WITH ME "
 
 Inspired by " Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ For Her POEM " Hold Me Once More "

Written by HGarvey Daniel Esquire For the Contest "Create A New Form, Maybe?" by
                            Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Dedicated To My LOVES  " Barbara Jean Gorelick " & "Lenore Ellen Johnson"

I call this Form "Over-Under" 2 Verses one over the other, 
Same Theme; 2nd verse more Intense, more Vivid than the First. "Try it Out!!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine and unusual contest..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Way to go on your invented form, HG! Congratulations on your fine win. Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your win HG in Constance's contest "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 11:55 PM
HGarvey ... Congrats on big win in the contest....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Johnson Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations HG. I am seeing your name among the winners mrore and more. Well done. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:47 AM
"Over-Under" is a winning form, HG. Great concept, my friend, and congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on your well deserved victory. love, Lightening Ink.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Congrats HG my silent beau on this magnificent win in Constance's contest luv with this excellent entry.. so touching and sensitive .. a well deserved sweet victory from your forever "Sweetheart" always to enjoy luv...
Mehta Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, HG
Rhinem Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Smile ~ "Your Brightness' Two Loves 'My Dear Precious & Gifted Friend HG!!!'" ~ Smile, I think I might have seen "Lovely Barbara" at the Giants game last week? Smile, I hope that life has been treating "You" perfectly my friend &, good to see "Your Beautiful Brush" still creating such splendid canvas' of colourful hues ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Beautiful Poe &, Have A Very Wonderfully 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day Dear HG;" Bye!:) ~
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup HG. Love, Carol
Peranteau Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 7:28 AM
A beautiful form dear poet ! I just loved reading this heartfelt poetry ! Much love, james
La France Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest, soup mail in a moment ~~
Mehta Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 1:27 PM
As always very sentimental write your beloved Lenore and Barbara
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