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"twice Loved"

My Dearest Most Beloved Barbara, My broken heart began to live again Filtering the Heat of Life: Once more Holding hands, beside YOU ; I Stand To Know once again: LOVE is Grand See LOVE reflecting from Your Eyes Caressing the beach of Sandy blond hair Sweet smell of LOVE wafting in the Air Everlasting LOVE forYOU ~~~~~~~~~~~~ My Dearest Only Beloved Lenore My Love for You is Always True My Heart beats for You in “ ETERNITY “ The LOVE I Feel, Just Holding Your Hand I shout of my LOVE; TO “ GOD ABOVE “ Your long flowing Auburn Hair, Lariats : ME! Jade-Emerald : EYES : Piercing my Heart with Love Your “ WOMANHOOD “ , still wafts in my Nostrils I am “ FOREVER WITH YOU “ as YOU are " WITH ME " Inspired by " Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ For Her POEM " Hold Me Once More " Written by HGarvey Daniel Esquire For the Contest "Create A New Form, Maybe?" by Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Dedicated To My LOVES " Barbara Jean Gorelick " & "Lenore Ellen Johnson" I call this Form "Over-Under" 2 Verses one over the other, Same Theme; 2nd verse more Intense, more Vivid than the First. "Try it Out!!'

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Date: 11/23/2010 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine and unusual contest..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:45:00 PM
Way to go on your invented form, HG! Congratulations on your fine win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win HG in Constance's contest "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 11:55:00 PM
HGarvey ... Congrats on big win in the contest....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations HG. I am seeing your name among the winners mrore and more. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:47:00 AM
"Over-Under" is a winning form, HG. Great concept, my friend, and congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved victory. love, Lightening Ink.
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:36:00 AM
Congrats HG my silent beau on this magnificent win in Constance's contest luv with this excellent entry.. so touching and sensitive .. a well deserved sweet victory from your forever "Sweetheart" always to enjoy luv...
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, HG
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Date: 11/3/2010 12:34:00 PM
Smile ~ "Your Brightness' Two Loves 'My Dear Precious & Gifted Friend HG!!!'" ~ Smile, I think I might have seen "Lovely Barbara" at the Giants game last week? Smile, I hope that life has been treating "You" perfectly my friend &, good to see "Your Beautiful Brush" still creating such splendid canvas' of colourful hues ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Beautiful Poe &, Have A Very Wonderfully 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day Dear HG;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup HG. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:28:00 AM
A beautiful form dear poet ! I just loved reading this heartfelt poetry ! Much love, james
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest, soup mail in a moment ~~
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Date: 11/2/2010 1:27:00 PM
As always very sentimental write your beloved Lenore and Barbara
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