Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Twentynet'60s-W

Venera one
Mission Venus
Yuri Gagarin on Vostok
First man in Space.
Mars One
First woman
Valentina Tereshkova.
In space.
Leonev’s ten-minute walk in space.
An unmanned Soviet Craft Luna Nine
Soft landing
On moon
The first probe in lunar orbit
The first unmanned rendezvous and docking
The soil samples brought to earth
Ram’s probe on to the moon
First and only daughter
Luna brought on earth
Exact date
Exact time.


Dr. Ram Mehta

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Fourth Place win in:
Contest: Magic Decade's Mood sponsored by nette Onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi June 2, 2011 at 5:20 PM ahh our Ram always off the earth and mind in stars only girl child can bring his eyes down...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 8:06 PM Like that Space Odyssey movie so famous right around that time, full of references to outer space. Love how you got in a mention of your cute daughter named LUna. Congrats on your win,Dr. Ram.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 31, 2011 at 6:40 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

John Freeman May 30, 2011 at 5:31 AM Dr Ram, it is good to see your success in Nette's contest. Smile. Congratulations on your poem's honored placement. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet May 29, 2011 at 10:12 AM Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your win in Nette's contest.Liked it first time around....

Joseph Osita May 29, 2011 at 8:50 AM Congrats on your big win in nette's contest! Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 29, 2011 at 8:28 AM Congrats Dr. Ram on your super win in Nette's contest with this superb entry my friend.. enjoy another top spot for excellence in poetry ..luv..

Nette Onclaud May 12, 2011 at 10:48 AM hello, dr. ram... could you kindly confirm if you have my entry for your ongoing contest?? i am concerned as my piece for linda's " i'm bored with__" disappeared like what happened to your " holy Ghost" contest.. this and linda's were in my members page; then they disappeared ... i got over the trauma from yours only to find out it happened again... too much!... would like to hear from you soon.. :) oh, got your 60's art piece; holding on to it as it might get lost! huggs, nette

Kash Poet May 10, 2011 at 10:54 AM This is excellent Dr.Mehta!Very nicely you have finished the poem mentioning the birth of your daughter...

Carolyn Devonshire May 10, 2011 at 10:05 AM There were so many events that stood out in the '60s, Dr. Ram, that I tend to forget the marvels of space exploration that you described so well here! Excellent historical write. Wishing you success in sweet Nette's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 10, 2011 at 5:10 AM thankxx Dr. Ram.. I am able to be on more now that am on vacation .. no work..haha.. and just enjoy beach and poetry ..while my husband takes care of big business affairs... it is so refreshing.. and I am loving it so much...u are a special force on P.S. and one we all cherish and treasure.. and your words are always magnificent my friend.. appreciate the compliment .. luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 9, 2011 at 9:25 PM An awesome depiction of the sixties Dr. Ram.. Nette will surely luv all the historical events mentioned and we are reminded of in this brilliant write luv.. good luck my friend..

Lisa Cooper May 9, 2011 at 6:49 PM lovely verse :)

Carrie Richards May 9, 2011 at 6:32 PM Oh, I love the personal touch this brought home to your poem....delightful, ...a daughter born in the 60's! This was a great way to end your poem!