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Twentyfour 2018

frowns circus closed rings returned high wire suicide love splashed on the ground

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Date: 9/26/2018 8:28:00 AM
I can see children frowning because the circus is closed , but it is funny that the couple had chose to commit suicide off the high wire. Interesting
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Date: 9/25/2018 6:23:00 PM
I can't imagine the horror of a child viewing this. They would be traumatized. A chilling poem for sure Arthur!
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Date: 9/25/2018 6:17:00 PM
a circus which has gone wrong especially the punch in the end, arthur.. i like your use of symbolism here-- whether its politics, nature, relationships.. salute!... huggs
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Date: 9/25/2018 10:19:00 AM
A circus love affair gone wrong...Nicely expressed Arthur..
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Date: 9/25/2018 9:28:00 AM
A beautiful short verse that encompasses the entire circus. My compliments!
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Date: 9/25/2018 9:26:00 AM
A beautiful short verse that encompasses the enyire circus! My compliments!
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Date: 9/25/2018 6:07:00 AM
Wow, vivid image Arthur, it would have certainly made a splash from that height. Tom.
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