Twenty Years From Now

I have got no doubt twenty years from now I’ll transform myself into fragrant air To write rhymes as you’ll come under the bough So fondly I’ll raise those rings in your hair The poor guy busking in the street corner A cloth sheet spread before him on the road His mother is sick and he a loner I will put him into a dancing mode The girl planting the saplings of green rice Is pleased as she feels me in monsoon rain Dreams of bumper crop in her waiting eyes At harvest she waves at me in the train I’ll be in the moonlight on your dream grace As you sleep out after the day’s struggle Will move my moon-palm on your eyes and face Have a great sleep to face the next hustle The five basics of my body and mind Will blend with earth water air fire and sky I’ll look back at the orange left behind As in your eyes the cloud of time goes by Would there be a chance to seek any gift Please send me back to Bengal I’d say swift _______________________________________________________________ April 29, 2017 Note: Though I wrote it for the contest of the same name as in the title, but to my dismay I found the sponsor requires a sonnet. When I attempted to delete two stanzas to meet the need, I felt the integrity of the poem was getting compromised. Hence, for no contest.

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Date: 5/27/2017 7:02:00 PM
It does not matter, you did a good job on this poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 5/24/2017 3:54:00 AM
Hi Probhir, i concur with your end comments and saw immediately that too. Sorry I have not been a while but now I can see the great improvement in your style because I love this. So in essence , I hope you will still be with us in 20 years time. Maybe me too. What a thought. Ha ha
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/25/2017 5:49:00 AM
Ha ha ... 20 years time in ethereal chime ! ... thank you, Jannie ...
Date: 5/14/2017 6:15:00 PM
Beautiful musings, Probir. I've missed your wistful thoughts, they are always filled w/holistic wisdom. Such a winsome poem this is. It abounds w/modesty and gentle self-awareness. Excellent poetry, my friend. Love and peace to you always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/15/2017 8:00:00 AM
You are much generous, Freddie ... Thank you ...
Date: 5/1/2017 2:29:00 AM
I cannot understand how I managed to miss this captivating poem of yours my friend, Probir! You did very well not to compromise the Muse's inspiration for earthly gains. Beautiful poem. Much enjoyed!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios ... You always encourage ...
Date: 4/30/2017 9:46:00 AM
Probir, you evoke such beautiful images. And sometimes what we need to say won't fit the required format - better a good poem you are satisfied with than an amputated one so it fits the contest. A 7.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/30/2017 10:45:00 PM
Absolutely, Agnes ... Thanks for reading and liking the poem ...
Date: 4/30/2017 3:35:00 AM
Wonderful, probir!!! Just amazing. :) Shubham
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Date: 4/30/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Shubham ...
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