Twenty One

Selecting one number's a chore
it really was hard that's for sure
        Twenty-one's the result
         'cause now you're an Adult
you can do things you didn't before!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Great write that expresses what so many youth feel...Great work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 10:05 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Ralph and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
Alcorn Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 8:17 AM
ah so true, 21 is a golden year! :]
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