Tweet 9

stuck inside the clock face
looking out onto green fields
and white cloud punctuated blue skies
minute hand
rhythmically blocking the view
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:38 PM
This is clever and brilliant Scott! : )
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 10:09 AM
This is brilliant and beautiful. Leaving your pages for a while equates throwing away refined Gold into the pacific. Now I know why my hands itch when away from your pages. Top notch mental exhibition and a powerful seven. Its been a while wonderful friend!
Smith Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:37 AM
Something worth pondering. Short but attention grabbing and last line is perfect. Sorry I have not been by more often. Hope you are well. A 6.8 David in NZ
Williams Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 8:08 AM
A great tweet Scott.love t.
Ricci Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Hello Scott. May nothing block the view of green fields or blue skies (lol) We see the hand rolling rolling round and round with time. I found this original. Well done
Nance Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Tick tock. Just stopping by to say hi, it's been a while , hope you are good my friend. hugs x
Salehi Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 5:41 PM
then I'll dance as the day lights fade.
Dutta Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Wonderful! Really appreciable. Best Wishes
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:34 AM
- A great ... tweet, Scott - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:47 PM
this is SO COOL, Scott. I love it. By the way, you asked who wants to live forever? I DO! (but only if I am not filled with any horrid disease or aches and pains) I would live endlessly if I were able. Guess I have to settle for reincarnation?
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