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Twas the Night Before Christmas

‘Twas the night before Christmas My momma was upset ‘cause papa was drunk, A decorated tree stood lopsided in the corner And my older brother insisted Santa was bunk! I still had hope that ol’ Santa would appear With each noise outside, I ran toward my bed, Brother laughed at the idea of flying reindeer Momma said he’d come; papa’s nose was red. Eyes fluttering, I could hardly stay awake Snow drifting, Papa said Santa’ll need a jeep Suddenly it sounded like an awful earthquake, Icicles falling from the eaves, before I fell asleep. I can’t say what happened after I was snoozing, But Santa must’ve come, ‘cause when I woke up A new sled with runners ready for greasing Was under the tree, and Brother had a brand new pup!
Written November 23, 2022 Submitted to "The Night Before 3" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May

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Date: 12/24/2022 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win Milton, Very nicely penned, Merry Christmas
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Date: 11/23/2022 1:24:00 PM
a wonderful retelling of the famous poem, milton! i enjoyed...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was sort of hemmed in by the required first line, but it was a fun write, and I hope the sponsor enjoys it.
Date: 11/23/2022 11:54:00 AM
You're well into the Christmas mood Milton, best of luck and happy thanksgiving to you for tomorrow. Tom
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Date: 11/23/2022 12:01:00 PM
(chuckling) Just for that contest, Tom. I'm being a real scrooge this year, as I'm not even having a Christmas tree! There's just me here, so, I don't want all the hassle.

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