Turtle Snap

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I'm Looking at the Haiku in the Mirror Poetry Contest

7/25/2023

turtle snap makes splash
in few words one discovers
the underbelly

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/26/2023 2:43:00 PM

I love turtles! Deep haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2023 7:03:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2023 2:24:00 PM

Interesting one. Turtles are a very interesting species as is mankind. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2023 7:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

John Read

Date: 7/26/2023 9:38:00 AM

I do like Haiku's,but struggle trying to write them. All the best in the contest Kim.xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2023 7:02:00 PM

I’ve written so many over the last few years. I am still learning.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2023 7:20:00 PM

that's pretty cool, Kim. Good luck. I never won with this sponsor in my 13 years here, so I gave an old haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2023 8:20:00 AM

That’s crazy!

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/25/2023 3:59:00 PM

enjoyed the metaphoric element, thanks yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Yann! I appreciate you!