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turquoise mediterranean sea

tourists sail on yachts - a crowded raft capsizes and refugees drown written 9th July 2019 for Kim's haiku hue contest

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Date: 8/26/2019 5:25:00 PM
Hello Jack Horne, That is because too many people on board. The water sounds so beautiful. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/9/2019 12:50:00 PM
First to comment but last to congratulate, however always in awe of your poems. Congratulations jack my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/28/2019 6:54:00 PM
such a hard hitting image Jack am far more used to your humourous poems! seeing this scenario all too often in the press lately:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:50:00 PM
so sadly accurate, Jack though once in a blue moon it's the cruise ship capsizing. You won with yours. Congrats to you, my friend
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Date: 7/15/2019 12:17:00 PM
so, sad, congratulations on your awesome win, :)
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Date: 7/15/2019 8:58:00 AM
powerful yet sad images....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/14/2019 9:40:00 PM
One we can all relate to from the news. The contrasts startling! Congratulations, Jack! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 7/11/2019 2:11:00 PM
That is exactly what is happening close to where i live, Jack. the contrast between tourists and refugees is clearly projected. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/11/2019 6:09:00 AM
Sad. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/10/2019 3:26:00 PM
that's quite sad, Jack. Usually you are funny!
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Date: 7/10/2019 2:21:00 PM
Very sad, the never ending story of the wealthy and the desperate and poor. Astonishing words that deliver a world of meaning! Well penned Jack, Hugs, Jennifer.
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