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Just watching the clouds like a child..

Turquoise

The child looks to turquoise blue sky Where the shapes fly or stay Through the Redbud blooms espy Whispy angel wings play
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Debole Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Like everything about your poem
Culverhouse Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 9:26 PM
enjoyed reading today....nice reminder of childhood days lying in the bushes looking at the sky and hiding.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Lovely poet and lovely poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Sweetheart Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:44 AM
lovely write Sara.. floating lines of pure delight luv.. my soup mail is acting strange this morn so will answer u shortly .. if for a contest good luck..
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Sara, nice rhyme... always watching..pd
Wesley Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:25 PM
I see these thing too Sara, think I'm in my second childhood? Sweet visions to look at.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Beautiful Sara! Children see so much more than adults. If this is for the contest, I know it will do well. Blessings, Rhonda
K Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Absolutely Beautiful!
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