Turquoise

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Just watching the clouds like a child..

The child looks to turquoise blue sky Where the shapes fly or stay Through the Redbud blooms espy Whispy angel wings play

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Gail Debole

Date: 3/5/2012 2:38:00 PM

Like everything about your poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/4/2012 9:26:00 PM

enjoyed reading today....nice reminder of childhood days lying in the bushes looking at the sky and hiding.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2012 1:40:00 PM

Lovely poet and lovely poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2012 10:44:00 AM

lovely write Sara.. floating lines of pure delight luv.. my soup mail is acting strange this morn so will answer u shortly .. if for a contest good luck..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 6:33:00 PM

Sara, nice rhyme... always watching..pd

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/2/2012 5:25:00 PM

I see these thing too Sara, think I'm in my second childhood? Sweet visions to look at.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/2/2012 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful Sara! Children see so much more than adults. If this is for the contest, I know it will do well. Blessings, Rhonda

Jessica K

Date: 3/2/2012 4:05:00 PM

Absolutely Beautiful!