Turning Up Her Imagination

keep the music sorrowfully low, so big daddy doesn’t hear. the shadowy figures, surrender and whisper in your ear. the psychedelic colors flow like the sea foam beat. Angie, your chromatic hair smells incandescently sweet. locked and loaded, alone with your beastie dreams. your pillow’s soft and it leans - your coming apart “at the seams” one boy plays peek-a-boo, sniffing your honeysuckles suspended. tickled by your goldilock curls, not realizing all it portended. like walking into the deep dark wood, he creeps hand and foot, eyes first like a prowling tiger, tail wagging, with a rattling tongue a-thirst. Angie, swooshes her fingers through his hair, hushes him. ...he stares at the ceiling stars ...loud music descends on his limbs. Angie digs her embryonic duffel bag, smiles and adds his decomposing bones to the ashes of her huge imagination and recalls that in this world, she’s all alone. 5/8/2019 Musical Inspiration Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Song choice: Angie, Baby by Helen Reddy

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Date: 5/21/2019 9:15:00 PM
Your dark creativity is brilliant, Kim. Beautifully captivating. Congratulations on your well-deserved and wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/12/2019 2:23:00 PM
This is an amazing poem Kim. Congratulations on POTD. A well deserved award. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/12/2019 4:19:00 AM
Wow Kim, this is really impressive and very deserving of POTD honors! Congratulations! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/11/2019 9:01:00 PM
You have taken a haunting song and expanding it into an even darker drama with skilful words and subtle imagery. Very well done and impressive, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2019 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Date: 5/10/2019 4:19:00 PM
You have set the mood. This is so beautifully written and presented. The melody plays on. And on. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/10/2019 10:21:00 AM
Brilliant verse Kim.and deserving of POTD. Congratulations. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/10/2019 9:27:00 AM
Utterly wonderful Kim and and I salute you for being POTD and hoping for being one of the top 3 winning entry of that contest! Aloha @wk
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 5/10/2019 9:00:00 AM
Hey!- Kimmy Baby!...great write and song...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...happy singing...^WW^...{*J*}
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:49:00 PM
LOL...thank you sweet WW! :)
Date: 5/10/2019 8:25:00 AM
Very nice, Kim. Congratulations on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Charles!
Date: 5/10/2019 8:14:00 AM
Very creative...Congratulations Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 5/10/2019 7:44:00 AM
- Congratulation on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/10/2019 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Kim, well deserved, a very good, creative write... that last stanza is dynamite !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Lawrence! Glad you enjoyed the final stanza :)
Date: 5/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim :) xomo
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Date: 5/10/2019 6:55:00 AM
Congrats Kim on poem of the day..you wrote a beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 5/10/2019 6:14:00 AM
A wonderfully penned poem, Kim, congrats on POTD. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/10/2019 4:37:00 AM
Congratulation on POTD Kim with this gem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 5/9/2019 4:25:00 AM
I remember that song. Well penned interpretation of it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 5/8/2019 9:11:00 PM
I love this one, Kim. You are a true talent. I do admire the length and beauty of your poetry Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Panagiota!
Date: 5/8/2019 8:48:00 PM
Wow! This is beyond awesome, a stunner! Reminds me a bit of the best of the Twilight Zone episodes. Here's to you, O Poet! A FAVE for sure. ~ Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/13/2019 2:53:00 AM
And now I see that this was selected POTD. Not surprising at all. Au contraire, it would have been surprising had it not been selected. Way to go, Kim! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
Date: 5/8/2019 4:45:00 PM
This is great poetry my friend. Love the ending...Great imagination and creativity on display.... A fav...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 5/8/2019 3:39:00 PM
makes my heart throb... a gripping poem, kim..huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 4:00:00 PM
Thanks, Nette!
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