Turning Up Her Imagination

keep the music sorrowfully low, so big daddy doesn’t hear. the shadowy figures, surrender and whisper in your ear. the psychedelic colors flow like the sea foam beat. Angie, your chromatic hair smells incandescently sweet. locked and loaded, alone with your beastie dreams. your pillow’s soft and it leans - your coming apart “at the seams” one boy plays peek-a-boo, sniffing your honeysuckles suspended. tickled by your goldilock curls, not realizing all it portended. like walking into the deep dark wood, he creeps hand and foot, eyes first like a prowling tiger, tail wagging, with a rattling tongue a-thirst. Angie, swooshes her fingers through his hair, hushes him. ...he stares at the ceiling stars ...loud music descends on his limbs. Angie digs her embryonic duffel bag, smiles and adds his decomposing bones to the ashes of her huge imagination and recalls that in this world, she’s all alone. 5/8/2019 Musical Inspiration Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Song choice: Angie, Baby by Helen Reddy
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Ashley Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:15 PM
Your dark creativity is brilliant, Kim. Beautifully captivating. Congratulations on your well-deserved and wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs...Kim
Proxenos Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 2:23 PM
This is an amazing poem Kim. Congratulations on POTD. A well deserved award. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer! Hugs...Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Wow Kim, this is really impressive and very deserving of POTD honors! Congratulations! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs...Kim
Brewer Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:01 PM
You have taken a haunting song and expanding it into an even darker drama with skilful words and subtle imagery. Very well done and impressive, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Nicole Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 4:19 PM
You have set the mood. This is so beautifully written and presented. The melody plays on. And on. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Brilliant verse Kim.and deserving of POTD. Congratulations. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Utterly wonderful Kim and and I salute you for being POTD and hoping for being one of the top 3 winning entry of that contest! Aloha @wk
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, William!
Warrior Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Hey!- Kimmy Baby!...great write and song...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...happy singing...^WW^...{*J*}
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:49 PM
LOL...thank you sweet WW! :)
Messina Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Very nice, Kim. Congratulations on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Thank you, Charles!
Michael Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Very creative...Congratulations Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:44 AM
- Congratulation on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Sharp Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Kim, well deserved, a very good, creative write... that last stanza is dynamite !
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Lawrence! Glad you enjoyed the final stanza :)
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May 10, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim :) xomo
Pandit Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Congrats Kim on poem of the day..you wrote a beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Gondolf Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 6:14 AM
A wonderfully penned poem, Kim, congrats on POTD. John
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, John!
Kitchin Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 4:37 AM
Congratulation on POTD Kim with this gem!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Kiser Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:25 AM
I remember that song. Well penned interpretation of it.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Romios Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 9:11 PM
I love this one, Kim. You are a true talent. I do admire the length and beauty of your poetry Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Thanks so much, dear Panagiota!
Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:48 PM
Wow! This is beyond awesome, a stunner! Reminds me a bit of the best of the Twilight Zone episodes. Here's to you, O Poet! A FAVE for sure. ~ Gershon
Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 2:53 AM
And now I see that this was selected POTD. Not surprising at all. Au contraire, it would have been surprising had it not been selected. Way to go, Kim! ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
Lindley Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:45 PM
This is great poetry my friend. Love the ending...Great imagination and creativity on display.... A fav...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:39 PM
makes my heart throb... a gripping poem, kim..huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thanks, Nette!
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