Turning the Seashell

       turning the seashell
       adjusting my eyes
       contemplating
       passages unseen
       inside

       pushing me
       down its slide
       on slopes
       whose whispers
       surround
       my ride
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 3:57 PM
what beautiful imagery in your poem...the journey seems sublime.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 2:38 PM
You have me turning over that shell in contemplation…
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:39 PM
Keep contemplating there, Kim. Who knows how many twists and turns shells have deep inside them? (I sure don't).
Goldsmith Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 12:14 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Have a wonderful day writing away..................
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Oh, I'm trying my best...
Lawless Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Have you been playing with Alice again.....
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:42 PM
How'd you know? ~ White Rabbit
Swan Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 4:27 AM
very pretty! The unseeable imagined and a visual slide without a ladder to climb first. :)
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