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Turning Scars Into Stars

He told me about his white death sheet And the dark, dark times of not being heard… I listened to his stories of cutting, blood and scars And told him some of my own… I wanted to wrap myself up with him back then, I wanted to be the one he saw in the mirror When he looked in it and saw himself bleeding… He told me about the locked room Where his past and future were feared dead And I wanted to be in there with him, Be his shadow he felt had betrayed him too, Turn all his sorrow into poetry That gave his soul wings... And all along I knew that he knew That this darkness This despair This anguish Was what brought him here, to this now… He knew that he must embrace chaos To give birth to a dancing star For every scar… No resolve no matter how strong, No line in the sand no matter how long Could survive the love of such a man...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/13/2016 3:35:00 PM
Girija Girija, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:59:00 AM
"Nice first post. Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs
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Date: 4/4/2016 10:14:00 PM
Welcome Girija. Wonderful first post. I hope to read many more of your poems going forward. I think you'll find great encouragement from most all the poets here at the soup. It's a great world wide community of talented writers ready to help you in any way...
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:18:00 PM
Girija, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:41:00 PM
Such a warm welcome - thank you!

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