Turning Into a Carcass Slowly

The beauty of truth shriveled and spit
Like July 4th snakes, dying on the sidewalk
My eyesight is going, but I don’t think I lie

My shingles are back, expressing anger and pain
My flesh house is crumbling
I will not be sorry when it dies

The smells of old age parade around in my house
Sneering and poking their fingers at me
Reminding me of the smell of garbage piles of Pomona

I always hated old people. 
Their wrinkles, age spots, blue veins 
Especially their smells 
I watch myself turn into a carcass
It is taking longer than I had hoped

I never took a pill before
And now here I am, a pothead
With bad teeth, and black holes
In a mouth no one hears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Walker Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:09 AM
"Especially their smells I watch myself turn into a carcass It is taking longer than I had hoped" It's true, but I maintain that I am only watching myself go through this from a safe distance.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Thank you David for completely understanding this one.
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