Turned Tables

What if the tables had been turned...
And it was her, looking at me
Seeing what the eyes can't believe
And what the heart can't embrace

I'm looking into sorrow's face
The sadness wraps itself around her 
Like a blanket of grey fog
A face so pale, so ashen and cold as a winter's day
Betrayed and abandoned by her youth
The girl she used to be....why can't I find a trace?
A youth taken away by choices,  
By circumstance, by life experiences 
By things that I cannot know
My memory of her has been stolen away 
In this unexpected, brief encounter
I swallow tears in my grief, as I mourn the vision
That had been tucked away in my heart for so long
Is it regret, or is it a guilt I cannot name?

A friendship born in childhood, so young, so carefree
She, with bright eyes, and blond hair that curled
Around her high cheeks and rosy smile
She was the one who shined so brightly,
Who's charm, who's gay laughter I had so admired
A childhood where we danced together in sweet grass under sunny skies
Where is the innocence, the radiance?
No longer there, not even a glimpse of the girl I knew

Oh, how I weep inside
Now, here, this meeting by chance
After years that had taken us to seperate worlds 
In my mind, and in my dreams, she had always been
The fair maiden, the one who had held my hand
Two little girls who made promises
Who sat in the dark, under a summertime sky
By the light of the moon and wished upon the stars.
The stars now gone from her sad eyes, the look of weary miles
Now fill the void ......as one more time.....
                                         we say our goodbye.

What if the tables were turned
And it was her, looking at me.....
......................................................................................................

In honor of Desiree's Contest "What If"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/15/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 2:52:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Carrie. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Great job. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:49:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of sediree, Carrie
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in this contest ..an excellent entry ..luv..
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in this contest with this excellent entry ...
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:10:00 PM
she was dear and what did she see? I think I need to see a picture of you. I believe in the past I have but my mind is not finding your face, you email me a picture or facebook or somethin' Light & Love
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